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    Here is my first entry. Feedback appreciated
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    Toronto

    Hello!

    Here is a revision, in a blueish color.

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    Toronto 2

    Hello!

    Here is another concept. Similar in design to the first, but a bit more emphasis on healing animals.

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    Illumina – your design is very nice, but there are a couple of local hospitals using the heart theme.

    David Y – We’re not getting the feeling of “care” in the design. The dog and cat eyes glow but in an eerie kind of way.

    Casperamy – the Toronto 2 design is nice, the bandages are okay, but many clients hate the thought of having to use Elizabethan collar – so perhaps omitting it. Also, a little less of a curl/spiral to the tip of the cat tail.

    Dragonfly – The inverted design is working – could “we” try the following; making the outer black circle thinner, could we finish of the hands around the wrist and make the entire upper circle black. We liked the orange colour you used in a previous rendition as well.

    Thanks again.

    Dr Mitch

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    Hello Dr. Mitch!

    Here is a revision with requested changes.

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    Thanks,
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    My aim was to use the cat&dog in a more 'alive' way.
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    Jaba: Thank you for the interesting design. Would you be able to do the same design but the veterinary caduceus in the middle with a first aid cross (two cross) instead of the medical alert emblem (three cross)
    Thanks

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    Hi Dr. Mitch,

    Here's my entry.

    http://pvdesign.com.sapo.pt/toronto/...ll_toronto.png

    Feedback is appreciated.

    Paulo

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    Hi Dr Mitch,

    This is my revision. Is it ok this way?
    I'm not sure if I understood well the part of the wrists.

    In the color version I added some effects for you to have an idea of how it would look in the web and full color printings.

    http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v3...C/TVRH_02e.jpg

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    Thank you dragonfly, that was pretty much what I was trying to describe. Using that same design (with a very thin line around the hands) could you put back the circle connecting the hands and keep the fine line encircling the hands (like in the orange version). One other thought, with the simple black and white of the black dog and hands on white background - could you make the center gray (the cat head etc) so that it forms a black and grey circle?

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    Revision

    Hi Dr Mitch,

    Here are some more options according to the feedback.

    http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v3...C/TVRH_02f.jpg

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    Here is one with the modifications you requested.
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    Revision

    Hello!

    Here is a last revision on my first entry. I never asked if you would prefer the text on a curve or in a horizontal layout?

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    Thanks,
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    Toronto 3

    Dr. Mitch,

    I had a third submission posted, but apparently it was too close to someone elses design So this is my third entry.

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    I kept it one color for now, I havent received alot of feedback on preferred colors.

    Let me know what you think.

    Thanks,
    Chris
    Last edited by casperamy; 05-28-2008 at 05:41 PM.

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    Hi Dr. Mictch,

    This is the fist time I do this but, can I have your feedback on my 1st entry on post #31 (Veterinary Referral Hospital Logo - $750 - May 26), please?

    Paulo

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    Sorry for the late reply folks - it has been a busy week for us.
    Casperamy - thanks for the revisions - I think with your design, the curved text works very nicely.
    Guetizo - nice design, but we don't get the animal care "safe" feeling.
    Dragonfly - thank you for the revised colours
    Jaba - nice revision, thank you!
    I will post another message if there are any more specific changes we would like.
    Cheers!

    Dr Mitch

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