OfficeBook Identity/Character - $625 - Feb. 6th

[KorteX]

Heres my second concept
http://img27.imageshack.us/img27/5595/teamkl6.gif

[obgregg1]

Vovikus,

Could we try removing the wings? I think I understand where you are going with the wings but I would like to avoid the potential pitfall of angel imagery here. Angel with a tie.... Dead businessman? Could be trouble.

G

[obgregg1]

Baiskee -

I'm not a fan of the cartoon look. I'm not really sure how that fits my requirement at all. I clicked on your Logoworx link. Lots of nice stuff in there.

Could you try again with something that better suits the business market?

G

[baiskee]

Thanks obgregg1 for the feedback.

Here's my 2nd try...

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b4...officebook.jpg

[Vovikus]

Hello!
Here is another idea with the same character:

http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/k/aka_vo...ficebook21.jpg

Best regards,
Vlad

[geek]

Here's my idea. Inspired by a paperclip.

[intrepidguppy]

idea

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g2...fbk_mascot.jpg

[KorteX]

Any feedback on my second concept?

[Maxson]

Hello. Not sure what to say here, umm... an owl, guarding - or just sitting (: You decide.

[obgregg1]

KorteX -

Thanks for the second design. I'm thinking maybe people (or a single person) need to be on top of the book rather than under it. Thoughts?

G

[obgregg1]

Basikee -

That's certainly a bold look. I'm having trouble seeing it for this application. How would it work with the existing logo?

I think I like the fact that it has no face. Easier to use as an icon & less culturally specific.

G

[obgregg1]

Vovikus,

Interesting. Could we see the pen with a straighter clip? Also maybe a more square top?

G

[Vovikus]

Hello!
Here are the revisions requested.

http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/k/aka_vo...ficebook22.jpg

Best regards,
Vlad

[Dragonfly]

Hi G,

I'll try to submit an idea.
Is there any possibility that "officebook" is shown without capital letters?

[obgregg1]

Hi G,

I'll try to submit an idea.
Is there any possibility that "officebook" is shown without capital letters?

Dragonfly -

Great to hear form you. Sure, let's see what lower case would look like.

G

[obgregg1]

Hello!
Here are the revisions requested.

http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/k/aka_vo...ficebook22.jpg

Best regards,
Vlad

Nice. I'm color-blind, so I need some help. What color are the tie and pen?

G

[KorteX]

KorteX -

Thanks for the second design. I'm thinking maybe people (or a single person) need to be on top of the book rather than under it. Thoughts?

G

What if they were on top, turning the pages?

[obgregg1]

Hello. Not sure what to say here, umm... an owl, guarding - or just sitting (: You decide.

Hi Maxson,

This isn't really floating my boat. I think the owl is a good scholarly symbol - but not sure if it works in this context.

G

[obgregg1]

Intrepidguppy -

Nice to see someone from Ottawa.

I like this concept. I need to stew on it for a few hours (my epic drive home). I'll send feedback this evening.

G

[obgregg1]

Here's my idea. Inspired by a paperclip.

Geek,

Nice work. I think I'm looking for something with more of a solid, substantial, look. Any other ideas?

G