Photographer Business Card - $200 - April 10th

[illumina]

experimented with colours, as requested:

Entry 1.3
Entry 1.4

[suh00ail00]

Thanks for the feedback and will have a revision soon.

[patsch]

Hi KHDZN

Thanks for your first entry.

The idea is good. Could you please make a black version? instead of the orange.

Regards
Patrick

Less is more design . . .

[patsch]

Hi Illumina

The Back from V1.02 looking cool, great. I think the front of your first version, with the logo in the corner, is clearer.

The font from "PatrickSchorer" is this also "Good Times"?

On the back: i think "Patrick Schorer" is not needed. so we have a little more place.

Thanks
Patrick

version 1.2

Entry 1.2

[illumina]

All of the fonts except the logo fonts are "Good Times"
I can change the front one to good times, leaving the back one as the original logo.

[patsch]

Hi Illumina

Thanks for the variations. Blue is the best.

I will thinking a little bit ...

Thanks
patrick

experimented with colours, as requested:

Entry 1.3
Entry 1.4

[KHDZN]

Hi KHDZN

Thanks for your first entry.

The idea is good. Could you please make a black version? instead of the orange.

Regards
Patrick

Hi, Patrick:

To make sure that I understand, you want me to replace the background orange on the front with black—do you want the colors to remain the same on the back of the card?

thanks!

[Jopicasso]

http://i636.photobucket.com/albums/u...-bscard-d1.jpg

Waiting for your feedback for my 1st entry
thanks

[KHDZN]

Hi, Patrick:

I can make any changes that you need. I kept the back of the card a different color—I think that makes the card pop but let me know if you want to see another color.
thanks!

[patsch]

Heya KHDZN

With the Black colour it is much more better. This variation is good.

I will come back with some points ...

Patrick

Hi, Patrick:

I can make any changes that you need. I kept the back of the card a different color—I think that makes the card pop but let me know if you want to see another color.
thanks!

[patsch]

Heya Jopicasso

Thanks a lot for your 1st entry.
It looks really special. Also the design from the back and the card with three round edges.

For the frontside:
-the colour is really good. Perhaps we can made a structure. something (as example) like this: DvilsGroup BC by =iblackmilk on deviantART
-Could you game a little bit with the logo or something like the follows example:
eG Cards 2 by ~SJROBZY on deviantART
- Perhaps we can place the complete logo in the front and on the back only the logo in the same colour and structure as the background. like this:
DvilsGroup BC by =iblackmilk on deviantART


Best regards
Patrick

http://i636.photobucket.com/albums/u...-bscard-d1.jpg

Waiting for your feedback for my 1st entry
thanks

[patsch]

Heya Illumina

Yes please, can you change the front fonts to good times?

Patrick

All of the fonts except the logo fonts are "Good Times"
I can change the front one to good times, leaving the back one as the original logo.

[Jopicasso]

Heya Jopicasso

Thanks a lot for your 1st entry.
It looks really special. Also the design from the back and the card with three round edges.

For the frontside:
-the colour is really good. Perhaps we can made a structure. something (as example) like this: DvilsGroup BC by =iblackmilk on deviantART
-Could you game a little bit with the logo or something like the follows example:
eG Cards 2 by ~SJROBZY on deviantART
- Perhaps we can place the complete logo in the front and on the back only the logo in the same colour and structure as the background. like this:
DvilsGroup BC by =iblackmilk on deviantART


Best regards
Patrick

Hello Patrick
thanks for the feedback, i really appreciate it

I'd like to ask you to list for me the elements that u like in this card :
DvilsGroup BC by =iblackmilk on deviantART

and would like to use in our card

and o you want me to add a texture?

thanks

[patsch]

Hi Jopicasso

Elements they could be interessting:
-Structure of the Background
-the logo in the same colour/structur as the background on the back.

-Texture? Perhaps a variation ...

Thanks and best regards
Patrick

Hello Patrick
thanks for the feedback, i really appreciate it

I'd like to ask you to list for me the elements that u like in this card :
DvilsGroup BC by =iblackmilk on deviantART

and would like to use in our card

and o you want me to add a texture?

thanks

[KHDZN]

My third submission.

[illumina]

v1.5

version 1.5

[illumina]

Second entry.

Entry 2

[patsch]

Hi Illumina

Very good.
Back site is good. Design also. Is it better when we change the font also?
Front: Colours are good. Font also. Coul you please change the design to your first version?

Thanks
Patrick

v1.5

version 1.5

[patsch]

Hi Illumina

Thanks for second entry.

It is completely different as your first. But good.

I don't know if it's clear with the big "lamella" logo. Can you please modify this a bit ;--))?

i will also thinking a little bit ...

Thanks
Patrick

Second entry.

Entry 2

[illumina]

Here it is with the original front design, and two versions of the back, so you can compare easily. One with good times font, the other with a different font.

version 1.6