Photographer Business Card - $200 - April 10th

[illumina]

Heres version 2 with different layouts of the lamella

Version 2.1

[patsch]

Heya Illumina

"Good Times" is a good font but i think on the card it is a little problem with the dimensions.

Have you any ideas to use another fonts?

Rest from the card i find very good.


Regards
Patrick

Here it is with the original front design, and two versions of the back, so you can compare easily. One with good times font, the other with a different font.

version 1.6

[illumina]

Here is another "techno" type font that works far better v1.7

[Jopicasso]

Hi Patrick here are the revisions, did not want to change in the logo too much so we wouldn't loose the identity of your business

waiting for your feedback, and wait for my 2nd entry


version 2:

http://i636.photobucket.com/albums/u...asso/d1-v2.jpg

and version 3:

http://i636.photobucket.com/albums/u...asso/d1-v3.jpg

[patsch]

Hi Jopicasso

Both versions are extremly good. Really.

Could you made some variations with other fonts. one of my favorite fonts are "good times". But also others are possible. Have you any ideas?

The round corners are in which radius?


Thanks and best regards
Patrick

Hi Patrick here are the revisions, did not want to change in the logo too much so we wouldn't loose the identity of your business

waiting for your feedback, and wait for my 2nd entry


version 2:

http://i636.photobucket.com/albums/u...asso/d1-v2.jpg

and version 3:

http://i636.photobucket.com/albums/u...asso/d1-v3.jpg

[Jopicasso]

Thanks Patrick
Good times is a good font but when used in big fonts only, because when it's small it's kinda fuzzy and not clear to read
i'd prefer a light (not too bold) font because it looks elegant on business cards, but if u prefer bold fonts (as good times) i tried here an example


good times:
http://i636.photobucket.com/albums/u...2-new-font.jpg


another bold font:
http://i636.photobucket.com/albums/u...-v3newfont.jpg


the radius of the reqtangle is 20 mm

[KHDZN]

Hi, Patrick:

Any comments on my 2nd and 3rd submissions?

thanks!

[jojomarie]

I'll be entering your contest in the near future, thanks!

[illumina]

My third and final entry. I wanted to make this one a little different

Entry 3

[patsch]

Hi KHDZN

Thanks for your 3rd revision.

Looks good with a completely different look.It's interessting without my "normal" logo.
I think it's better when the logo is integrated in the businesscard. Revision1 from entry one is good.

Best regards
Patrick

My third submission.

[patsch]

Hi Illumina

Your Revision v1.7 with the different techno type works absolutely better.

By this version i have actually any idea to change something.


Thanks
Patrick

Here is another "techno" type font that works far better v1.7

[patsch]

Illumina

another different concept. Really interessting. But i think it would be a "normal" businesscard, without a fold in the middle. But the idea is good.

As i wrote in the previous thread, your version 1.7 is really great.


Best regards
Patrick

My third and final entry. I wanted to make this one a little different

Entry 3

[patsch]

Hi jojomarie

Great. i'm looking forward to your first entry.


Best regards
Patrick

I'll be entering your contest in the near future, thanks!

[patsch]

Hi jopicasso

Really good looking. Both versions.

At the moment i couldn't make a decision between the to fonts ;---))



Best regards
patrick

Thanks Patrick
Good times is a good font but when used in big fonts only, because when it's small it's kinda fuzzy and not clear to read
i'd prefer a light (not too bold) font because it looks elegant on business cards, but if u prefer bold fonts (as good times) i tried here an example


good times:
http://i636.photobucket.com/albums/u...2-new-font.jpg


another bold font:
http://i636.photobucket.com/albums/u...-v3newfont.jpg


the radius of the reqtangle is 20 mm

[illumina]

Hi patsch, the card (v3) wouldnt come already folded, it would be intended to be handed out flat, and the recipient of the card can choose to fold it it was just intended to be something different and more memorable for people who receive your cards.

[patsch]

Hi Illumina

I'm thinking some minutes about your version 1.7.

is it possible that you make a version with a dark grey instead of black?


Regards
Patrick

Here is another "techno" type font that works far better v1.7

[KHDZN]

Hi KHDZN

Thanks for your 3rd revision.

Looks good with a completely different look.It's interessting without my "normal" logo.
I think it's better when the logo is integrated in the businesscard. Revision1 from entry one is good.

Best regards
Patrick

Hi, Patrick:

Do you want to see a revision to the third submission using your logo?

thanks!

[patsch]

Hey KHDZN

That will be great. yes.

Have you any ideas to do this?


Patrick

Hi, Patrick:

Do you want to see a revision to the third submission using your logo?

thanks!

[Jopicasso]

Dear Patrick
find my 2nd entry

i tried a new, unusual size with 2 options for colors . design can be done in any other sizes

thank you!

[KHDZN]

Hey KHDZN

That will be great. yes.

Have you any ideas to do this?


Patrick

I have an idea or two—I'll submit soon.