Dermot Kavanagh Orthodontics - $250 - April 7th

[NancyCarter]

http://www.nancycarterdesign.com/des...Dermot_2-0.jpg

[nhr]

Thank you for the feedback
My revision:

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b9...ntics2_nhr.png

[jojomarie]

Hello, I added the b&w, flat as well, thanks!
http://www.geocities.com/jojo7317/dermot2_1.jpg

[onesummer]

my first.

http://www.pauljobson.com/clients/logotemp/Dermot.jpg

[dkortho]

http://www.nancycarterdesign.com/des...Dermot_2-0.jpg

Sorry for the late response. I'm not creative myself, so I'm finding it hard to give suggestions! I can't see this latest design as something we would use.

I could see the smiley tooth inside the circle above the "DK" idea that you did, as a possibility.

Also, regarding your very first entry, with the smiley tooth inside the "DK", is it possible to revisit this, with the "DK" in less "bubbly" type font? I'd like to have a look at this design again, just with a more "professional" look.

Thank you for your help

[dkortho]

Thank you for the feedback
My revision:

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b9...ntics2_nhr.png

Sorry for the delayed response. Thank you for this latest entry. It could work....although, there is something about the design having just one eye that doesn't sit well with me!

[dkortho]

Hello, I added the b&w, flat as well, thanks!
http://www.geocities.com/jojo7317/dermot2_1.jpg

Thank you jojo, and as I said to the others, apologies for the late response. This design is quite nice. The shadow looks well. Unfortunately, it just doesn't grab me. The smile just might be too simple and obvious. As for further suggestions, I'm afraid I'm running out! But, if you have another idea you'd like to try out, please do!

[dkortho]

my first.

http://www.pauljobson.com/clients/logotemp/Dermot.jpg

Thank you for your first try Paul. I like it very very much. As for suggestions, could you show us this design with some alternative fonts etc? It's looking great!

[Vovikus]

Thanks again Vlad.
Continue working towards the "smile" idea. I'm not mad about the "DK" font here. The design you have for the smile kind of makes me think of an airline logo Can you alter this design? Also, please refer to my post above. Thank you!

Hello!

http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/k/aka_vovikus/Dermot31.jpg

Have a good day!
Vlad

[onesummer]

Thank you for your first try Paul. I like it very very much. As for suggestions, could you show us this design with some alternative fonts etc? It's looking great!

here's some alternative fonts. thanks.

http://www.pauljobson.com/clients/logotemp/Dermot12.jpg

[cincytodd]

I look forward to your thoughts on my first entry, thanks.

[nhr]

Sorry for the delayed response. Thank you for this latest entry. It could work....although, there is something about the design having just one eye that doesn't sit well with me!

I understand & revised Thank you.

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b9...tics21_nhr.png

[Vovikus]

3. Vlad, we previously responded to you that the light bulb idea mightn't work in this case. Now, however, it would be greatly appreciated if we could maybe see what else you can do with that idea! Is there any way a smile might look good in the lightbulb?

http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/k/aka_vovikus/Dermot111.jpg

Have a good day!!
Vlad

[illumina]

My first entry

[NancyCarter]

http://www.nancycarterdesign.com/des...Dermot_1-4.jpg

[NancyCarter]

http://www.nancycarterdesign.com/des...Dermot_1-5.jpg

[NancyCarter]

http://www.nancycarterdesign.com/des...Dermot_1-6.jpg

[dkortho]

here's some alternative fonts. thanks.

http://www.pauljobson.com/clients/logotemp/Dermot12.jpg

Hi Paul,

I like your original one best; can you 'centre justify' (if that's the right term!) the 'Orthodontics' under the 'Dermot Kavanagh'?

Thanks!

[NancyCarter]

http://www.nancycarterdesign.com/des...Dermot_1-7.jpg

[onesummer]

Hi Paul,

I like your original one best; can you 'centre justify' (if that's the right term!) the 'Orthodontics' under the 'Dermot Kavanagh'?

Thanks!

here you go. thanks.

http://www.pauljobson.com/clients/logotemp/Dermot13.jpg