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    Quote Originally Posted by Jopicasso View Post
    Thanks mlyonscavazos for the feedback.

    I'd like to inquire about 2 simple points:
    1- You have not mentioned anything about placing of dates, charges .. so I understand you like them as they are right now?

    2- For the imagery, all the pics in the examples you supplied are for teens mostly, so would you prefer teens pictures (kinda older than 12 years old kids)?

    thanks
    John
    We will get into the dates and rates details once I've picked a design.

    I think teens are fine as long as they don't look too old, or too adult. Again, we want imagery that an 8-12 yr. old will aspire to, so we just need to be careful that we don't go too old here.

    Thanks!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jopicasso View Post
    Hello Again
    Please find here design after amendments

    version 2


    version 3

    As requested in info hierarchy ,
    I used several ways to draw attention to some data, for example; circle is the 1st element that attracts the eye. So I used this to attract watcher's eye to important info depends on priority

    I also used contrasts in font sizes for the same target. White spaces around text draws attention too.

    Thanks and waiting for feedback.
    I like what you've done with both of these. Hopefully my feedback was of some use to you. Cheers!

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    Hello, here is my design, any changes are welcome, thanks!
    Summer Camp Design

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    Quote Originally Posted by jojomarie View Post
    Hello, here is my design, any changes are welcome, thanks!
    Summer Camp Design
    Got it. At first glance, looks very nice. Thanks!

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    Another design with color variants

    Design 3


    Thanks!

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    I will be submitting a design soon. Thanks!

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    For your consideration. Please let me know if you like this style. I will work in space for the date, cost, etc.

    Thanks!
    Karen
    Last edited by KHDZN; 04-06-2009 at 04:52 PM. Reason: ENTRY REMOVED

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    Thank you all for your work in replying to this contest thread. This is my first contest here, and the process was really fun and illuminating for me. I'll definitely recommend this process to my friends and colleagues.

    The winner is Jopicasso and design 3.

    Thanks again to all of you for the time and effort you put into this. I saw a lot of great work in this contest thread.

    Cheers!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jopicasso View Post
    Another design with color variants

    Design 3


    Thanks!
    Great work! This is the winning design--congratulations. OK, couple things:

    1) There are TWO camps. Dates are July 20-24, and Aug. 3-7. (9:00 a.m.-3:00 p.m. Kids 8-12 (I realize this is more info than you allotted space for, let me know if this creates problems for your layout).

    2) Prices are $210 for five days, $130 for three days

    3) let's get rid of the 'FREE 15 min. assessment' blurb. This is not so relevant to the camps.

    4) The business has a new name--Joyous Racket LLC (please replace Groove Musical Arts with this name).

    In the short term, I'll go with something very similar to this with the above changes. This is for two seminars I'm giving this week. Longer term (next week) I will make changes to the contact info (ph. and email and website) and need to look into getting this onto my website, mass-distributing the flyers, and possibly doing a small, print ad version of this as well. Let's discuss this soon.

    Thanks again, great work!

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    Quote Originally Posted by mlyonscavazos View Post
    Great work! This is the winning design--congratulations. OK, couple things:

    1) There are TWO camps. Dates are July 20-24, and Aug. 3-7. (9:00 a.m.-3:00 p.m. Kids 8-12 (I realize this is more info than you allotted space for, let me know if this creates problems for your layout).

    2) Prices are $210 for five days, $130 for three days

    3) let's get rid of the 'FREE 15 min. assessment' blurb. This is not so relevant to the camps.

    4) The business has a new name--Joyous Racket LLC (please replace Groove Musical Arts with this name).

    In the short term, I'll go with something very similar to this with the above changes. This is for two seminars I'm giving this week. Longer term (next week) I will make changes to the contact info (ph. and email and website) and need to look into getting this onto my website, mass-distributing the flyers, and possibly doing a small, print ad version of this as well. Let's discuss this soon.

    Thanks again, great work!
    Oh! And one more thing. Let's edit the attributes at the top left: get rid of 'Inspiring' and change 'Encouraging' to 'Encouragement'. So, there should only be three attributes here--that should clean things up a bit.

    Thanks!

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    Congrats Jopicasso!

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    Quote Originally Posted by mlyonscavazos View Post
    Great work! This is the winning design--congratulations. OK, couple things:

    1) There are TWO camps. Dates are July 20-24, and Aug. 3-7. (9:00 a.m.-3:00 p.m. Kids 8-12 (I realize this is more info than you allotted space for, let me know if this creates problems for your layout).

    2) Prices are $210 for five days, $130 for three days

    3) let's get rid of the 'FREE 15 min. assessment' blurb. This is not so relevant to the camps.

    4) The business has a new name--Joyous Racket LLC (please replace Groove Musical Arts with this name).

    In the short term, I'll go with something very similar to this with the above changes. This is for two seminars I'm giving this week. Longer term (next week) I will make changes to the contact info (ph. and email and website) and need to look into getting this onto my website, mass-distributing the flyers, and possibly doing a small, print ad version of this as well. Let's discuss this soon.

    Thanks again, great work!

    Thanks for choosing my design

    I will review your modifcations and get back after implementing it, and also waiting for the rest of the data
    I need to know all the sizes that u need, and also which colors did u choose?

    Thanks again, it was a fun contest

    & thank you Karen

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    Congratulations, Jopicasso! Please send me a private message with your paypal address, and let me know once you've sent the files. Also, please include the name of the contest in the PM.

    mlyonscavazos, thank you for hosting your contest with us, and congratulations on your new design! Please let me know once you've received the necessary files and I'll transfer the prize funds at that time.

    I will now turn your ability to PM back on so you can communicate with the designer.

    Vicki
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    Prize sent.
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