Momentum - $275 - April 15th

[pmv-consulting]

Hello!

My 1st try:

http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/k/aka_vo...Momentum10.jpg

Have a nice day!
Vlad

Vlad,

Thanks for the submission! The overall design is clean, vibrant, and the components are well-integrated. However, it seems to lack the spirit of Momentum. The angles and arrows do not seem to have any purpose. Also, the colors should be modified. Please avoid orange, red and purple.

Thanks again and looking forward to revisions!

-MMT

[pmv-consulting]

Thanks for the feedback...

Some variations.

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b4...momentum-1.jpg

Baiskee,

I still like the harmony of the whole design, especially regarding font and colors. However, I think the arc and arrows need to be reworked altogether as they are still too 2-dimensional and seem to lack meaning. Could you put together another design using the same blue and green? We also prefer the shades of green you picked this time over the gradient effect of the first.

Thanks!
-MMT

[pmv-consulting]

Second entry

illumina,

This entry is a definite improvement over the first! We all agree it is pleasing to the eye, simple and straightforward. We like how the symbol is worked into the "o" of Momentum. I think the part of the design that leaves us wanting more is that it seems very generic or possibly used many times for other company logos. Do you have any suggestions on how to make it more unique?

Looking forward to your ideas!

-MMT

[cookman]

Hi. A new idea - abstract "M" showing movement and momentum.

[Vovikus]

Thanks for your feedback!
Here is next variant.

http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/k/aka_vo...Momentum20.jpg

Best regards,
Vlad

[Maxson]

Thanks. I liked your first idea so here's what I've made

Maxson,

Love this entry as well! Do you think there's anyway to embed an M in the middle of the circles without making it look too busy? Or find a way to give the circular logo a little more interest by adding more colors to the lines, similar to how you did the Dockwell logo, but keep the colors to 4 by pairing 2 colors on one semicircle (alternating lines) and 2 on the other.

We really do like this submission as well. Nice work!

-MMT

[pmv-consulting]

Hi. A new idea - abstract "M" showing movement and momentum.

Cookman,

This is a great submission. Can you make the "mv" in the formula lowercase and substitute the orange with a shade of green?

Thanks,
-MMT

[pmv-consulting]

Thanks for your feedback!
Here is next variant.

http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/k/aka_vo...Momentum20.jpg

Best regards,
Vlad

Vlad,

I like the colors, but the font and the logo are a bit too cutesy for our liking. Too similar to an M&M candy. Try these colors again in a different design that's less bubbly.

Thanks!
-MMT

[pmv-consulting]

Thanks. I liked your first idea so here's what I've made

Maxson,

Thanks for trying to work with my suggestion. I don't like the radio wave-looking M in the middle of this version. You also took out 2 of the 4 concentric circles, and I did like them all there. Though I do understand why you did it. When you staggered the half-circles so they didn't align anymore, then less rings were better and less dizzying. I may reconsider the staggered half circles at a later time, because the orbiting effect is cool.

For now, however, let's go back to the topmost design in your version 2.0. Please embed a small, subtle, light gray "M" or "m" in the middle of the circle. I would like to see that variation.

Thanks!
-MMT

[Maxson]

Sure

Maxson,

For now, however, let's go back to the topmost design in your version 2.0. Please embed a small, subtle, light gray "M" or "m" in the middle of the circle. I would like to see that variation.

Thanks!
-MMT

[pmv-consulting]

Sure

Maxson,

Thanks for the revision. I like the one on the bottom in version 2.2 best with the Momentum text. Could you change the orange to green?

My colleagues, on the other hand, enjoyed the top logo in your version 2.1 and requested some minor modifications. Could you take the top version 2.1 logo and remove the center radio-wave-like 'M', switch the orange to green and place a light gray capital 'M' in the middle, like you did with version 2.2? They would like to see one version with 2 concentric circles and one with 3 concentric circles.

We certainly appreciate your patience and your willingness to help us visualize our proposed suggestions.

Thanks!
-MMT

[jojomarie]

Hello, any changes are welcome, thanks!
http://www.geocities.com/jojo7317/momentum_1_0.jpg

[Maxson]

Requested revisions

[Vovikus]

Hello!

http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/k/aka_vo...omentum300.jpg

Have a nice day!
Vlad

[cookman]

Thanks for the feedback. Here are the revisions.

[baiskee]

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b4...momentum-2.jpg

Thanks!

[pmv-consulting]

Hello, any changes are welcome, thanks!
http://www.geocities.com/jojo7317/momentum_1_0.jpg

Jojomarie,

Thanks for your submission. We like the use of blue and green, but would like it muted slightly. The p=mv in circles doesn't seem to say much to us in terms of momentum. We are open to a different approach to representing the p=mv. Also, the font for MOMENTUM is clean, but a bit too square and bold for us.

Looking forward to revisions!

-MMT

[pmv-consulting]

Requested revisions

Maxson,

The middle design in this last revision is nearly perfect. I would enlarge the M just slightly and call this design done. We will confer on all the designs after Wednesday as they are very diverse. But, this is my personal favorite.

Nice job!

-MMT

[pmv-consulting]

Hello!

http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/k/aka_vo...omentum300.jpg

Have a nice day!
Vlad

Vlad,

I like the use of the arrow and how an M is discernible within the circular logo. The colors are also pleasant and bright. I would not tweak anything in this design. It offers us a great option when our marketing team comes together to discuss how we want Momentum Consulting represented.

Thanks for your contributions!

-MMT

[pmv-consulting]

Thanks for the feedback. Here are the revisions.

Cookman,

I like the green much better over the orange. Could you provide some variations on shades of the green and blue to make them a bit lighter, brighter, or more mellow? We like the design but would like to see the shades tweaked a bit in a presentation of a couple of different options.

Thanks!
-MMT