Black Belt Recruiter - $220 - July 8th

[geek]

No worries. Here's the red. Thank you.

[cincytodd]

I LOVE the concept!!! Not really fond of splitting Color & Belt on two different lines. ...and the Font is not making it happen. ...but the CONCEPT...WOW!!!

Is this any better?

[BBR]

No worries. Here's the red. Thank you.

geek - I really like the samples with the black background. How do you present the black background with the black foreground...will you make the background grey?

[BBR]

Is this any better?

cincytodd - the belt seems to be a "ring" instead of a "belt" ...any suggestions?

[oscard]

my 3-rd logo concept

[Dongerz]

Dongerz - Thank you for the entry! The abract character in the R is readily identifiable...and is catchy and fresh. Not sure I like the extra 'splashes'...almost looks graphically violent. Look forward to seeing this put together in a Red Belt & Green Belt presentation. You may be onto something!

Hi BBR,
Thanks for your comments. I decided to take the martial arts concept a bit further and morphed the character to look like japanese writing. I went solid with the belt representative circle to tie in the whole asian theme. I think it's much cleaner and stronger. Let me know what you think.
Thanks
Dongerz

[designumber18]

Hi there... here's my entry. Feedback appreciated!

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2452/...570da46b_o.jpg

[baiskee]

Thanks for the feedback.

Revision...

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b4...lackbelt-1.jpg

Thanks!

[BBR]

my 3-rd logo concept

oscard - very nice assemblage. you've done a nice job putting together the elements of a belt, an R, and the text. good work!

[BBR]

Hi BBR,
Thanks for your comments. I decided to take the martial arts concept a bit further and morphed the character to look like japanese writing. I went solid with the belt representative circle to tie in the whole asian theme. I think it's much cleaner and stronger. Let me know what you think.
Thanks
Dongerz

Dongerz - I LOVE IT! Of course, mine is only one vote...but GREAT work! ...also, can we see the Graphic positioned to the left of the text for each color? I like how it looks on the top, but we would like to see the other placement as well. Thank YOU!

[BBR]

Hi there... here's my entry. Feedback appreciated!

http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2452/...570da46b_o.jpg

designumber18 - Thank you for your entry! I appreciate that you've taken into consideration our comments regarding color, design pattern, round, use of belt, etc. I just discussed this with another person and we think it "feels" like a 'conversation bubble' that might be seen in a cartoon...probably the way that the ends of the belt trail out of the rest of the round graphic.

[BBR]

Thanks for the feedback.

Revision...

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b4...lackbelt-1.jpg

Thanks!

baiskee - this looks super! I think you have a great entry now for final consideration!

[Dongerz]

Dongerz - I LOVE IT! Of course, mine is only one vote...but GREAT work! ...also, can we see the Graphic positioned to the left of the text for each color? I like how it looks on the top, but we would like to see the other placement as well. Thank YOU!

Hi BBR,
Glad you like it. I am very pleased with they way it came out. Here it is again with the addition of the horizontal layout as well. Let me know.
Thanks
Dongerz

[geek]

The Blackbelt logo/badge is suppose to be in white circle. Since it is the higher rank it needs to stand out better - being a black and white combo shows the characteristic of a good master. A master that has acquired all the skills need not show off his true color. A Yin (Action) and Yang (Stillness) which enables him to "be calm outside", "be rigorous inside". Like in fight, the one with the normal state of mind always win.

But let me show you how it looks in grey as requested. Thank you.

[oscard]

color variations.

[BBR]

Hi BBR,
Glad you like it. I am very pleased with they way it came out. Here it is again with the addition of the horizontal layout as well. Let me know.
Thanks
Dongerz

Excellent!

[BBR]

The Blackbelt logo/badge is suppose to be in white circle. Since it is the higher rank it needs to stand out better - being a black and white combo shows the characteristic of a good master. A master that has acquired all the skills need not show off his true color. A Yin (Action) and Yang (Stillness) which enables him to "be calm outside", "be rigorous inside". Like in fight, the one with the normal state of mind always win.

But let me show you how it looks in grey as requested. Thank you.

geek - LOL...I did a poor job of phrasing my point. I meant to pose a hypothetical instead of a literal question. I wasn't making a request to see it in grey, but rather was simply 'wondering out loud'. ...my mistake. Actually, I do like the white and appreciate your explanation on colors!

[BBR]

color variations.

oscard - I like the color variations...but when doing this (which is advisable) then the text also needs to be changed up to reflect the color...the green color should say GreenBelt instead of BlackBelt, etc. Good work though...looks great!

[Dongerz]

Excellent!

Thanks BBR! Let me know if there's anything else you'd like to see. Look forward to your decision.

[oscard]

sorry, I wanted to keep only the simbol, after that I changed my mind, and I forgot to change the text, but here is with the correct text.