Nine Little Months - $270 - July 14th

[oscard]

here is my logo idea. Thanks

[Vovikus]

Revision:

http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/k/aka_vovikus/Nine_11.jpg

Have a nice day!
Vlad

[Britami]

Thanks for redoing the design Illumina. I like it but I don't see it as something that I would use - at least not as it it currently stands. I think the graphic is a good change, but I feel that the middle of the graphic looks too much like an apostrophe, or a fetus....and to be honest I am not too keen on it. I am also not too keen on the colors as they stand right now.
I don't know how this forum works - ie. I don't know how many revisions a designer does - perhaps it just depends on how many they want to do? Which seems fair to me. I would be interested to see more changes, but obviously that's entirely up to you.

[Britami]

http://www.daphnesanjose.com/temp/nlm2.png

This is definitely my favorite design so far. My only revision request would be for the leaf to be a different shape - right now it could be seen as a devil's tail. So perhaps the leaf could be more clearly a leaf?

Thanks. Also, again, I don't know how this site works in terms of asking to see different treatments of a logo? It would be interesting to see this graphic with the words placed differently? For example, there will be occasions where I won't have enough horizontal space to have all the words underneath the graphic, so it would be good to have an alternative with perhaps "nine" above and the other two words underneath? I don't want to ask for more than this competition is designed for so just let me know if that's too much.

[Britami]

I went back to the drawing board and came back with my third and final entry which blends the clothing and maternity aspects into a symbol above the type that can be used on its own as you had requested. I look forward to your feedback, thanks!

Thanks for your final design. To be honest, it is not one that appeals to me either. I think that it is a great design, just not what I am looking for. Maybe a little complex or something? Thank you though.

[Britami]

Hi Britami,

Here's my idea.

http://origin-all-design.com/dc/nine/originall_nine.png

Feedback is appreciated.
Paulo

Paulo,
Thanks for the design. Again, I like it, but not for this type of product. I think that this would be more appropriate for children's clothes or toys. I really appreciate you taking the time to enter...do you have any other ideas?

[Britami]

Hi, here's my first entry

Maxson,
Another quality entry, but one that is not conjuring the type of imagery that I would like. This logo makes me think of Aztecs or The Lion King...something to do with the travel industry perhaps. It doesn't make me think of babies or pregnancy. Any amendments that you can think of?

Please feel free to ask specific questions if more clarity would help in your design.

[geek]

Here's my another idea using the number 9, and a pregnant woman. Thank you.

[daphne]

Here are two leaf designs, as well as versions with stacked text.

http://www.daphnesanjose.com/temp/nlm3.png

[baiskee]

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b4...ttlemonths.jpg

Thanks!

[Britami]

here is my logo idea. Thanks

I love the concept behind this logo....the 9 and kangaroo being one element is a great idea, but unfortunately this makes me think of Australia more than maternity. Thanks Oscard for your work.

[Britami]

Revision:

http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/k/aka_vovikus/Nine_11.jpg

Have a nice day!
Vlad

Thanks Vovikus. As I mentioned previously, I like your logo, but something is just not feeling right. I am not sure what it is so I am sorry that I can't be more specific (which is not much use to you I know). Maybe it's that it has such clean lines? It just isn't conjuring "maternity" in my mind I guess.

[Britami]

Here's my another idea using the number 9, and a pregnant woman. Thank you.

This is another wonderfully inventive idea! I love the idea but this again feels a little 1980's to me, a little dated.

[Britami]

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b4...ttlemonths.jpg

Thanks!

This is another concept that I think is great, but for my uses I think it is too detailed. I am going to use the logo in places where it is quite small and I think that this might be difficult to see once it gets small.

[oscard]

thanks for your feedback. I will try to come with a new concept. regards, Oz

[Britami]

All the designs that I have seen have really impressed me. They are very professional and there are some really creative ideas which have been excellently carried out.
I apologize if my responses are short or don't have enough detail (or are not very technical). I am a mom of three kids who are under 4 years old so time is very limited . If you need more information or would like more clarity about my comments, please don't hesitate to ask.
And thank you for your wonderful logo's!

[Britami]

Here are two leaf designs, as well as versions with stacked text.

http://www.daphnesanjose.com/temp/nlm3.png

Thanks Daphne,

I like your new leaf designs a lot (I prefer the oak type leaf on the top design). The treatments with the stacked writing are great. This is still my favorite design so far.

[Dongerz]

Hi Britami,
Here is my first submission. I went with a simple runway fashion look using a simple iconic character. I wanted to keep it simple and readable but with a little style to it. Let me know what you think.
Thanks
Dongerz

[daphne]

Just in case you wanted to see all versions with the oak leaf:

http://www.daphnesanjose.com/temp/nlm4.png

[Vovikus]

Thanks Vovikus. As I mentioned previously, I like your logo, but something is just not feeling right. I am not sure what it is so I am sorry that I can't be more specific (which is not much use to you I know). Maybe it's that it has such clean lines? It just isn't conjuring "maternity" in my mind I guess.

Ok, I think I understood =)
I have modify last concept in accordanse to your feedback.
I've try to incorporate heart symbol, leaf and "9" into one sign. Fonts i prefer to leave unchanged. Hope to hear your opinion ))

http://www.ljplus.ru/img4/a/k/aka_vovikus/Ninel_12.jpg

Have a nice day!
Vlad