NYC Boudoir - $225 - Aug. 3rd

[Robin]

Hi everyone.
Again thanks for all your hard work! Oscard and Chung these are not quite what we are looking for. We are not liking the females in either one. I'll have Neil get in on this too.
intrepidguppy I would like to see the lines that look like arms just a bit thicker. Not much just a Tine bit.

[mizzdabeat]

I didn't forget about this contest! I hope to work on another submission tomorrow. Being 9 months pregnant has me working much slower than usual!

[Robin]

idea
http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g2...ppy/nycbou.jpg

Hi there .. this is Neil, posting under Robin's account.

I love this logo, but would like two minor adjustments.
Her face is too oval and oddly shaped.
And the eyebrows look like horns.

But really, these are very minor adjustments. I already like it a lot.

thanks!

Neil

[Dongerz]

Hello,
Here is my first take. Any feedback is appreciated.
Thanks
Dongerz

[intrepidguppy]

Revision:

I purposely left hands out as I feel it harmonizes with the overall feel of minimalism for this image. If it went too detailed the hands would likely draw attn to themselves and the the overall piece.

http://i57.photobucket.com/albums/g2...ds/nycbou2.jpg

[Robin]

Dongerz I LOVE THIS! very NYC.
Could I see it with a different font? Just a little less fancy.
I'm sure Neil will jump in here soon.
Thank you!!

[Dongerz]

Dongerz I LOVE THIS! very NYC.
Could I see it with a different font? Just a little less fancy.
I'm sure Neil will jump in here soon.
Thank you!!

Hi Robin,
Glad you like it! Here's a new font plus a couple other fonts and layout that I though worked equally well. I splashed in the color a bit more in the figure in 1.2. Let me know what you think.
Thanks
Dongerz

[Robin]

OMG they are wonderful!! Neil loves it too.

[Robin]

Dongerz, Now we are fighting over which one LOL
Could you switch the girl to the opposite side in image 1.2 and 1.3? and use the girl with the smooth arms. The first girl you designed.

Thanks!

[Robin]

Ok we are getting down to the end...
Neil and I have asked for some minor design changes for several of the logos recently but I don't see them yet.

Intrepidguppy are you working on any changes? I would really like to see the arms of the girl a bit thicker and perhaps a hint of a thumb on the hand area. Not actual hands. I know Neil had some things he would like changed also.

Dongerz...
I would also like to see the changes to your logo...Could you switch the girl to the opposite side in image 1.2 and 1.3? and use the girl with the smooth arms. The first girl you designed. Can the red color be changed by us if our web site colors change?

Thanks!

[Robin]

Hi Mizzdabeat Congratulations on the baby!

[Dongerz]

Dongerz...
I would also like to see the changes to your logo...Could you switch the girl to the opposite side in image 1.2 and 1.3? and use the girl with the smooth arms. The first girl you designed. Can the red color be changed by us if our web site colors change?

Thanks!

Hi Robin,
Here are the last changes you asked for. On 1.3 I felt the image worked facing either direction so I showed both. 1.2 the image definitely worked best the way I've shown it. I personally prefer 1.3a. To me it having the figure facing away from the text makes her look more demure and mysterious. On the other hand I like the way the image flows you into the text on 1.3b. What do you guys think? Your call

I will supply you with a vector based eps file among other formats and as long as you have a vector program such as Adobe Illustrator or compatible, yes you will be able to change the colors as you see fit. If you don't have a vector program, I'd be happy to make whatever changes you like, including color studies. We discuss all that upon approval.

I hope this answers your questions and please let me know if there is anything else you'd like to see.
Thanks
Dongerz

[Robin]

Hi Robin,
Here are the last changes you asked for. On 1.3 I felt the image worked facing either direction so I showed both. 1.2 the image definitely worked best the way I've shown it. I personally prefer 1.3a. To me it having the figure facing away from the text makes her look more demure and mysterious. On the other hand I like the way the image flows you into the text on 1.3b. What do you guys think? Your call

I will supply you with a vector based eps file among other formats and as long as you have a vector program such as Adobe Illustrator or compatible, yes you will be able to change the colors as you see fit. If you don't have a vector program, I'd be happy to make whatever changes you like, including color studies. We discuss all that upon approval.

I hope this answers your questions and please let me know if there is anything else you'd like to see.
Thanks
Dongerz

Thank you so much!!! Neil is in England teaching right now and I'm trying to get him on the phone and tell him to come look at the logos!

[Robin]

Hi Dongerz.
We would like to pick 1.1 as the winner.
Thank you for making all the changes we asked to see right up until the end of the contest. That played a huge part in our picking your desing.
Now what do I do to get the files?
Thanks!
Robin

[Robin]

Dongerz,
It says to PM you and get the files but I don't see any way to send you a PM.
I also need the files very quickly because I have to order business cards for the business launching party I'm running behind on all the things I need to do!
Robin

[Dongerz]

Dongerz,
It says to PM you and get the files but I don't see any way to send you a PM.
I also need the files very quickly because I have to order business cards for the business launching party I'm running behind on all the things I need to do!
Robin

Hi Robin,
Thank you so much for choosing my design 1.1. The project administrator will now turn on the ability to PM. In the interim I will prep the production files.

BTW- I wanted to say I really love your work. You have a great eye. Very sexy and enticing yet tasteful and classy. I wanted to say so earlier but didn't want to seem like I was trying to sway the vote. Anyway, I'll get you the files ASAP.

Thanks
Terry

[baiskee]

Congrats Dongerz, nice logo!

[Dongerz]

Congrats Dongerz, nice logo!

Thanks Baiskee!

[Robin]

Hi Robin,
Thank you so much for choosing my design 1.1. The project administrator will now turn on the ability to PM. In the interim I will prep the production files.

BTW- I wanted to say I really love your work. You have a great eye. Very sexy and enticing yet tasteful and classy. I wanted to say so earlier but didn't want to seem like I was trying to sway the vote. Anyway, I'll get you the files ASAP.

Thanks
Terry

Awe thanks so much for the nice words
I'll be teaching out in California with Neil planet neil next spring If you know any girls who want boudoir tell them to email me! LOL I know we are going to San Francisco but not sure what the second city will be. We go out there every year. I still want to feel an earthquake!! Just a little one.
I sent a message to the design contest web site but still don't see how to PM you. My email address is robin.owen@hotmail.com maybe you can get me that way.

[nevadabadgirl]

Congratulations, Dongrerz! Please send me a private message with your paypal address, and let me know once you've sent the files. Also, please include the name of the contest in the PM.

Robin, thank you for hosting your contest with us, and congratulations on your new design! Please let me know once you've received the necessary files and I'll transfer the prize funds at that time.

I will now turn your ability to PM back on so you can communicate with the designer.

Vicki