
Originally Posted by
wspero
JJ,
This is looking so amazing! A few small things and I think we are done. I am really happy with the design. You captured just what I am looking for. Small comments:
1. Banner - Fantastic! My only comments is that it is pushed a little too far left (running into the sword) and maybe you want to fade or darken the left or right edges just a bit so it blends in.
Also, it would be way cool to have a banner for each section (plus one more I am thinking of adding). I really like how you made the picture part of the site. I think I would be asking for something out of scope to get 5 additional banners. What would you charge to do 5 additional ones that go with the site? If you do this, I like the idea of changing colors drastically with each banner. So the first one is great. The next one could be very similar to the "Photo: floral background © javarman #1248394" you suggested. I like the yellow. And then maybe a a purple, an orange, etc.
2. Navigation Bar - Looks nice. Can the left/right edges darken a little more and blend a bit with the black a little more? I see you already did this, but I think maybe even more merging into that black would be good. Also, on the buttons, can you do graphics for a "depressed" button? Or something so you know when you are on a section. I don't want to just reverse colors. If you have any ideas on what might look cool. Whatever you do with one button, I could probably copy for the others.
3. Scroll- Thanks for extending it. I like it. Now that you know I am happy with the length of the scroll. can you work with edges a little so it does not looked cloned for added length?
4. Person picture - All the other pitcures and images you have selected for this site are awesome. But the face on this one just looks more "funny" than deadly. If you can find another one, that would be wonderful.
5. Realm of Draza font and look - I do like it, but I also think it is a tad chunky (at least the Realm and Draza parts - the "of" is fine). If you have anything else that may look interesting to try, I would not mind seeing one other option. But if not, this one is nice.
Again, super job JJ. This really looks like a medieval/fantasy website.
Will
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