Fair Share Profit - $250 - August 8th

[orioncarrier]

Here is the changes you suggested...

Not bad, smack. Maybe that arrow/house could now be fatter, with the head at the same angle, so that it ends lower. Does that make sense?

Thanks again!

[orioncarrier]

My first entry

Wow, thanks, illumina. Neat screenname, btw.

That is a very interesting graphic design and arrangement. And I really like the subtle color contrast. It is busier than I was looking for, but somehow, maybe the sublter color combination offsets that. Very tempting, and I have no suggestions for modifying it. At this point anyways. It's quite nice the way it is.

Thanks for a very interesting submission! I'm going to show some friends.

[smack]

Not bad, smack. Maybe that arrow/house could now be fatter, with the head at the same angle, so that it ends lower. Does that make sense?

Thanks again!

Hi orioncarrier
Thanks again for the feedback
I made the arrow/house wider and aligned it to the top of the text. Is this what you meant by: "the head at the same angle, so that it ends lower"?
Let me know.

[RockStarNeil]

Thanks a lot, Rockstarneil.

I think I like the previous one better. It was good to see though. I think it's between that one and the original one I said I liked now.

Thanks Orioncarrier!
If you would like to see any more revisions and/or changes just let me know!

[nhr]

Hello:

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b9...rties1_nhr.png

Thank ou.

[orioncarrier]

Hi orioncarrier
Thanks again for the feedback
I made the arrow/house wider and aligned it to the top of the text. Is this what you meant by: "the head at the same angle, so that it ends lower"?
Let me know.

Actually, what I was meaning was to leave it at the same height, but let the arrow head continue lower. It looks like you just changed the proportions of the whole object. It's hard to describe without a pencil!

But the top of the arrow would definitely need to be about as high as in your last design, otherwise it looks like an afterthought.

[orioncarrier]

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b4...hareProfit.jpg

Thanks

Hi baiskee,

Thanks a lot for this design. It's a nice one too, and quite versatile. It kinds of gives a feeling of promise, as if there is a sun-rise in the background. A nice concept!

[orioncarrier]

Hello:

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b9...rties1_nhr.png

Thank ou.

Thank you, nhr. An interesting, nice-looking design. It maybe takes up more business card real estate than I want it to, though...

Thanks very much for the submission!

[nhr]

Thank you for the feedback. My second concept, focused on profit:

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b9...ties20_nhr.png

[smack]

Actually, what I was meaning was to leave it at the same height, but let the arrow head continue lower. It looks like you just changed the proportions of the whole object. It's hard to describe without a pencil!

But the top of the arrow would definitely need to be about as high as in your last design, otherwise it looks like an afterthought.

I think I know what your getting at now. I feel with your feedback that the arrow/house in this latest revision is the strongest. What do you think?

[orioncarrier]

It certainly can be done. Here you go!

Hi Rockstarneil,

I guess the contest is closing today, I don't know if it's too late. I would be interested in seeing the top design from post #21, and the design from post #32 one above the other for comparison, if you could.

Also, are you able to do it in the PMS colours? I hear it's much easier for a printer to get the colours exact with those numbers.

I appreciate all your effort!

Orion

[orioncarrier]

I think I know what your getting at now. I feel with your feedback that the arrow/house in this latest revision is the strongest. What do you think?

Hey smack,

That's not looking bad. I'm wondering if I can see three versions one above the other with the arrow in the proportions you have here: one with the door, one without but with a little chimney, and one with neither?

It'll be hard to make up my mind here!

Thanks a lot for all your help!

Orion

[orioncarrier]

Thank you for the feedback. My second concept, focused on profit:

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b9...ties20_nhr.png

Hey nhr,

Interesting design again! The real estate usage issue is cleared up, but the design is maybe a little busier than I'm envisioning.

Thanks very much for the submission!

Orion

[MAC]

Hello,
I hope I am not late to post here. I didn't want to make two posts in a row here so you can count this as two concepts.
I made arrows which are houses as you see. Please let me know what you think

http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/7820/69613681.jpg

Kind regards,
Matas

[orioncarrier]

Hello,
I hope I am not late to post here. I didn't want to make two posts in a row here so you can count this as two concepts.
I made arrows which are houses as you see. Please let me know what you think

http://img156.imageshack.us/img156/7820/69613681.jpg

Kind regards,
Matas

Hey Matas,

Thank you very much for your submission. It is interesting artwork and nice colours!

The arrows look like they are representing profit from multiple sources which is kind of nice, but one comment I would make is that they seem to be pointing in a backwards direction rather than forwards. I would also want the full name of the business to appear "Fair Share Profit Properties LLC".

It looks like the fact the contest closes today means we actually get to do this for the rest of the day. Yay. So feel free to resubmit if you want to.

Cheers,
Orion

[RockStarNeil]

Hi Rockstarneil,

I guess the contest is closing today, I don't know if it's too late. I would be interested in seeing the top design from post #21, and the design from post #32 one above the other for comparison, if you could.

Also, are you able to do it in the PMS colours? I hear it's much easier for a printer to get the colours exact with those numbers.

I appreciate all your effort!

Orion

Hi Orioncarrier!

Here are my 2 submissions you requested (In 2 posts, because I can only post 1 picture at a time). I have also included the PMS colors as you asked.

Have a great day!

[RockStarNeil]

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[MAC]

Hey Matas,

Thank you very much for your submission. It is interesting artwork and nice colours!

The arrows look like they are representing profit from multiple sources which is kind of nice, but one comment I would make is that they seem to be pointing in a backwards direction rather than forwards. I would also want the full name of the business to appear "Fair Share Profit Properties LLC".

It looks like the fact the contest closes today means we actually get to do this for the rest of the day. Yay. So feel free to resubmit if you want to.

Cheers,
Orion

Alright, thanks, I will post a new version later .

[smack]

Hey smack,

That's not looking bad. I'm wondering if I can see three versions one above the other with the arrow in the proportions you have here: one with the door, one without but with a little chimney, and one with neither?

It'll be hard to make up my mind here!

Thanks a lot for all your help!

Orion

Sorry for the late post. here is the revision you wanted to see.
Thanks

[orioncarrier]

Sorry for the late post. here is the revision you wanted to see.
Thanks

Thanks a lot, smack. Yeah, I like the last one, without any of the details. Clearly I'm looking for clean and simple on this design.

It will be difficult to choose just one design. Thanks very much for your efforts!

Orion