504sports - $200 - Oct. 15th

[robyn]

I can't tell currently that this says 504 Sports

Thanks for the comment... I took the general 504 general services, not only supplying wheelchairs but other warm and healthy products as well as it's services of the target market.

[Dave Poulin]

Hey Dave, I wanted to let you know that I am working on a totally new concept for you and should have it completed late tomorrow night after I get my kids in bed or Friday night at the latest.

I hope you are doing well? Looking forward to the new concept you are thinking of. To save time, if need be, ask questions.

FYI - all court wheelchairs, hockey sleds (sit skate), alpine sit ski are the primary pieces of equipment that we are making and selling to school districts. Another little piece of equipment is a tether that is used by a blind and sighted guide while running. This tether is simply wrapped around each others pinky with about 10 inches between them. Just trying to help with some insight to us.

Thanks.

[Dave Poulin]

This is the wife. I really like it...very unique. Would love to see it with a little change to the numbers 504....not sure about the eyeballs but let us know if there's meaning.

Thanks much!

[Dave Poulin]

Thanks for the comment... I took the general 504 general services, not only supplying wheelchairs but other warm and healthy products as well as it's services of the target market.

Wondering if you got my wife's feedback. I too am interested with a couple little tweaks.

[cincytodd]

I hope you are doing well? Looking forward to the new concept you are thinking of.

I am still trying to make my other concept that adds a human element to it but is just not quite there yet. I have come up with another concept in the meantime however that I look forward to your reaction. The two flags represent two teams and competition and the circular graphic on the red flag can be taken a couple different ways. It can be a wheelchair wheel and most sports use balls which have lines on them and there are so many lines in sports to mark the field etc... The flags offer a dynamic element.

[robyn]

Wondering if you got my wife's feedback. I too am interested with a couple little tweaks.

Thanks... I submit asap.

[robyn]

Here a new editions, sporty texts, light color variations themes.

http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/4198/504yh.jpg

This one with "active health icon at the #0" same as ' ying yang symbol.

http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/3369/5042x.jpg

I hope you like it more Thanks.

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[Dave Poulin]

here a new editions, sporty texts, light color variations themes.

http://img5.imageshack.us/img5/4198/504yh.jpg

this one with "active health icon at the #0" same as ' ying yang symbol.

http://img24.imageshack.us/img24/3369/5042x.jpg

i hope you like it more thanks.

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yes!

[Dave Poulin]

yes!

Thanks for the changes.

Like the style of the 5 and the 4 but not the filler on the 0...too yin/yang looking. Not sure what to recommend...thought maybe a 3rd arc or thinner arcs...not quite there yet.

Is it silly to try to do something combining the 0 of 504 and the o of sports?? Interested to hear what you think...

I think we like the overall appearance - the oval and tracks on oval...definitely on to something here!

Thanks much!

[Dave Poulin]

I am still trying to make my other concept that adds a human element to it but is just not quite there yet. I have come up with another concept in the meantime however that I look forward to your reaction. The two flags represent two teams and competition and the circular graphic on the red flag can be taken a couple different ways. It can be a wheelchair wheel and most sports use balls which have lines on them and there are so many lines in sports to mark the field etc... The flags offer a dynamic element.

Thanks for making efforts with new and different concepts! Appreciate it. Not quite the right direction for us but still am looking forward to your other concept.

Although I have described exactly what we are selling, those products or concepts don't have to be in the logo. Much like NIKE has that swoosh, it could be simple with a sharp feel. We did like your Zuuko and photography designs. I do know it does need to say "504 sports." Again, thanks.

[guetizo]

Hi Dave,

Here's my idea. I went in a direction that I considerer the focus of the concept the "504" numbers where I reconstructed them resemblance physical disabilities. I think you understand. For the word "sports" just a hint of color on the bottom tail of the first "s" to complete the letter, being that color the adaptive part and/or solution. I didn't wanted to go much far so the graphical part gets busy or to overpower the concept.

http://origin-all-design.com/dc/504s..._504sports.png

Colors scheme is easily changeable.

Feedback is appreciated.
Paulo

[Dave Poulin]

Hi Dave,

Here's my idea. I went in a direction that I considerer the focus of the concept the "504" numbers where I reconstructed them resemblance physical disabilities. I think you understand. For the word "sports" just a hint of color on the bottom tail of the first "s" to complete the letter, being that color the adaptive part and/or solution. I didn't wanted to go much far so the graphical part gets busy or to overpower the concept.

http://origin-all-design.com/dc/504s..._504sports.png

Colors scheme is easily changeable.

Feedback is appreciated.
Paulo

I like the way you think.............. very interesting and possible. Can you add Inc. after sports? Just found out I need to have this in the logo. Other then that, I don't know what I would change. Good job!

[Dave Poulin]

Thanks for the changes.

Like the style of the 5 and the 4 but not the filler on the 0...too yin/yang looking. Not sure what to recommend...thought maybe a 3rd arc or thinner arcs...not quite there yet.

Is it silly to try to do something combining the 0 of 504 and the o of sports?? Interested to hear what you think...

I think we like the overall appearance - the oval and tracks on oval...definitely on to something here!

Thanks much!

I also need to have Inc. added in small font after sports. I just found this out, sorry.

[Dave Poulin]

I am still trying to make my other concept that adds a human element to it but is just not quite there yet. I have come up with another concept in the meantime however that I look forward to your reaction. The two flags represent two teams and competition and the circular graphic on the red flag can be taken a couple different ways. It can be a wheelchair wheel and most sports use balls which have lines on them and there are so many lines in sports to mark the field etc... The flags offer a dynamic element.

I know you have a couple concepts already in the contest. I am going to need Inc. included after Sports in all logos. Just found this out so I apologize.

[Dave Poulin]

I like the way you think.............. very interesting and possible. Can you add Inc. after sports? Just found out I need to have this in the logo. Other then that, I don't know what I would change. Good job!

After looking at this now for awhile, I was thinking that the #4 is not "disabled" like the 5 & 0. Do you think we should also change the 4 just a little? Currently, it has font similar to the letters. Thoughts?

Don't forget that I need Inc. added after sports. It can be very small.

Thanks.

[robyn]

I know you have a couple concepts already in the contest. I am going to need Inc. included after Sports in all logos. Just found this out so I apologize.

Here it is;

http://img65.imageshack.us/img65/3403/504w.jpg

http://img203.imageshack.us/img203/1818/5042.jpg

Is it silly to try to do something combining the 0 of 504 and the o of sports?? Interested to hear what you think...

I think we like the overall appearance - the oval and tracks on oval...definitely on to something here!

Thanks much!

Thanks, i'll see what ideas i'll come up with 'combining with the O and o'.

cheers

[smack]

thanks

[Dave Poulin]

thanks

I plan to be in your home town for the 2010 Paralympic Games. These games are my inspiration and I know you can come up with something that is worthy of our elite athletes.

Nice, but no message other then the name. I encourage you to keep trying.

[robyn]

Here's ver.2.0, this what i came up with... 'combining the 0 and o ...
With 3 arc stripes.

http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/5176/5043.jpg
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[Dave Poulin]

Here's ver.2.0, this what i came up with... 'combining the 0 and o ...
With 3 arc stripes.

http://img269.imageshack.us/img269/5176/5043.jpg
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We like it but we like the two arches verses the three. Two looks like wheelchair tracks or even alpine skiing tracks. When we were talking about 3 before we were talking about the ying yang in the 0. We were trying to avoid the ying ying symbol so we thought you could add a third little arch within that ying yang symbol.

So 2 tracks and Inc added to this and it should be good. Combining the o & the O looks pretty cool.