504sports - $200 - Oct. 15th

[Dave Poulin]

Here is concept 2.
no web effects
http://i369.photobucket.com/albums/o...4SPORTS2-0.jpg

This is my favorite of the Coy designs so far. Wondering if you can add a colored background like your most recent entry has?

[Dave Poulin]

here's the latest...based on your request.

http://img98.imageshack.us/img98/8190/504n.jpg

http://img101.imageshack.us/img101/1818/5042.jpg

thanks.

Robyn,

Not wild about the combined 0 and O but do like the other new one better. Is it possible to see it with more subtle center art (center of 0) or even no art at all in center of 0? Also, not to throw you way off course, but if you think there's a quick and easy way to try a version with the phrase "adaptive equipment" somewhere would be curious to see what you came up with.

Thanks so much for all of your efforts!

[Dave Poulin]

Dave,

Another.

Feel free to mix and match. Some of them presented here and above can make a color scheme of your likings.

http://origin-all-design.com/dc/504s...ports_rev5.png

Feedback is appreciated
Paulo

Paulo,

Thanks for the colors. I think my favorite of these new color combos would be the last combo...the grey and blue with the 504 in grey. One other thing I'd be curious to see would be a colored box like you did before in red. Maybe some color that would work well with the last combination grey and blue, or maybe the 504 in black on a color background could look nice.

Thanks much!

[Dave Poulin]

Hi Dave, Remember me? I didn't want to waste my last entry on something that was not well thought out like my second entry seemed to be. I tried to come up with a symbol that shows motion in an edgy sort of way but that made 504 very prominent. The outer circular black part of the logo symbolizes a wheel in motion or a ball in play. Your company is in motion constantly with sports going round the year. I can see this black part spinning around the red circle part on your web page too. The rest of the logo would be stationary. So what do you think?

Hello Cincytodd,

Thanks for another new design. I like this one best of what you've done. Overall good concept and look. These are the 1st critique thoughts that come to mind. 1. the outer circular black part seems a little sharp - like a saw a little bit. 2. the font used for sports reminds me a little of a 50s soda shop font. Anyway to get a different font or 2??

Also, is it possible to try it with the phrase "adaptive equipment"?? Sorry to add something - may not end up wanting it a part of the logo, but curious to see what it would look like with it.

Thanks so much for the hard work!

[Dave Poulin]

This is my favorite of the Coy designs so far. Wondering if you can add a colored background like your most recent entry has?

The top version needs to have Inc. reversed. I do, however, like the second one better.

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my 2-nd logo

[Coy]

This is my favorite of the Coy designs so far. Wondering if you can add a colored background like your most recent entry has?

Will get that up real quick. Thanks for the feedback.
Also notice you replied to the same image twice. #60 above and #61 just curious if one was to feedback on my 3rd submission?

[Coy]

added the color background as requested. two different color combonations I have more but didn't want to muck up the canvas. but the color combinations are endless.
left the black and white the same but can reverse it out w/ a black background.
http://i369.photobucket.com/albums/o...4SPORTS2-1.jpg

[nhr]

Hello:

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b9...sports_nhr.png

Thank you.

[robyn]

Robyn,

Not wild about the combined 0 and O but do like the other new one better. Is it possible to see it with more subtle center art (center of 0) or even no art at all in center of 0? Also, not to throw you way off course, but if you think there's a quick and easy way to try a version with the phrase "adaptive equipment" somewhere would be curious to see what you came up with.

Thanks so much for all of your efforts!

Hi, thanks for the update. I agreed, on the 1st concept, would be best ... it presents your overall quality products and services. The icon is also good in branding, people could easily remember your business when they see it. Here's the update, I've changed the icon in the '0'...
and change color to a combi of matte and neon, to be look corporate yet sporty looks. Also included a view on sub-branding, a favicon can be derived on this logo too, for your online branding. I hope you like them.

with icon;
http://img527.imageshack.us/img527/1040/504p.jpg

without icon;
http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/1818/5042.jpg


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[cincytodd]

1. the outer circular black part seems a little sharp - like a saw a little bit. 2. the font used for sports reminds me a little of a 50s soda shop font. Anyway to get a different font or 2?? Also, is it possible to try it with the phrase "adaptive equipment"?? Sorry to add something - may not end up wanting it a part of the logo, but curious to see what it would look like with it.

Hello again Dave,

I dropped the saw-like sharp edges and focused on pumping up 504 because that is what most people are going to likely know you as. I changed the font and made the 504 more dynamic. I added Adaptive Equipment below as requested in a supporting role. Better?

[guetizo]

Hi Dave,

Thanks for the prompt feedback.
Here's the revision requested with the color scheme selected.

http://origin-all-design.com/dc/504s...ports_rev6.png

Feedback is appreciated.
Paulo

[Dave Poulin]

Dave,

And another. Made 504 bigger to better balance the whole logo concept.

http://origin-all-design.com/dc/504s...ports_rev3.png

Feedback is appreciated.
Paulo

I keep coming back to this logo and the only thing I struggle with is that there are only numbers and letters. Wondering if two fine lines can cross the background color as if they were tracks from a wheelchair or seated cross country ski. Maybe arching through the rectangle in the back of the numbers & letters? The two tracks should be fine and not thick as our wheelchairs use wheels similar to those found on a road bike. What do you think? A carving turn would be best, I think?

Dave

[Dave Poulin]

Robyn,

Not wild about the combined 0 and O but do like the other new one better. Is it possible to see it with more subtle center art (center of 0) or even no art at all in center of 0? Also, not to throw you way off course, but if you think there's a quick and easy way to try a version with the phrase "adaptive equipment" somewhere would be curious to see what you came up with.

Thanks so much for all of your efforts!

Could not reply for some reason on your latest logos.?

What about the 0 being totally blank without any solid color inside?

Black numbers I like.

Possibly play with the 504 font and make it disabled a bit yet still readable?

I do like the font used for Adaptive equipment.

Thanks

[robyn]

i am tossing my ver 3. colors are flexible. thanks.

http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/189/50422.jpg




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[robyn]

Could not reply for some reason on your latest logos.?

What about the 0 being totally blank without any solid color inside?

Black numbers I like.
Possibly play with the 504 font and make it disabled a bit yet still readable?
I do like the font used for Adaptive equipment.
Thanks

Here's what I understood on your request;

http://img2.imageshack.us/img2/6203/504r.jpg

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[Dave Poulin]

can you add Inc.?

[Dave Poulin]

Can you also add "Adaptive Equipment"?

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here is with the tagline and .inc