@ Coy:
Good first effort, and thank you for submitting, but that's not what I'm looking for.
The font just looks a little too whimsical; when I look at the logo you made, I feel like I'm looking at the logo for a fantasy movie or cartoon (Like Sword in the Stone, Lord of the Rings... or even the Renaissance fair). My biggest quam is the way the ends of some letters thin-out near the end... try and keep consistant thickness throughout the word. We're definitely looking for something a little more bold and in-your-face... something...
more serious in tone.
Also, the 'A' looks a little too friendly. Don't go for mean or anything (we don't want anything like Sepultura's 'S' logo), but not nice either.
Your design philosophies are certainly on the right track. You've got a nice, big 'A' there that can definitely stand alone, and the rest of the word fits nicely next to it. But unfortunately, the first attempt is off the mark. Because of this, I would suggest--instead of reiterating on your first attempt--that you go ahead and start again from scratch.
Would it maybe help if you heard one of the band's songs?
Once again, thank you for submitting, and please continue to do so.
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