Home Value Realty - $300 - Dec. 4th

[GregPriest]

Hi Greg
Here is the revision you asked for. I hope you like it more.
Thank you
Daniel.

Daniel:

I like the improvement. Thanks!

Greg

[GregPriest]

Hello,
Here is my first submission. Feedback is appreciated.
Thanks
Dongerz

Dongerz:

Not really the color nor the style I want to convey.

Thanks.

[GregPriest]

Appreciate the feedback.
I've changed the tag line a bit. Just taking out the Buy and Sell and leaving it "your homes best value". This leaves a nice area for a phone number, web address or even agents name and number. everything else is the same and should be highly visiable at far distance w/ the simple shape and text.
http://i369.photobucket.com/albums/o...eRealty1-1.jpg

Hi, Coy:

Let's remove the tag lines. I can always add something later.

Thanks!

Greg

[GregPriest]

All:

I would request that the ® symbol be added to each submission, and that any tag lines be removed. Thank you!

Greg

[nhr]

Hello:

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b9...OO/HVR_nhr.png

Thank you.

[nhr]

All:

I would request that the ® symbol be added to each submission, and that any tag lines be removed. Thank you!

Greg

My design is created before your suggestion, but can be revised if you want. Thank you.

[Dongerz]

Hi Greg,
Here is another stab at it. Let me know if this is closer to what you have in mind.
Thanks
Dongerz

[TheNutz]

All:

I would request that the ® symbol be added to each submission, and that any tag lines be removed. Thank you!

Greg

Hi
Here is the revision
® symbol added and the tag line removed.

[HWorks]

Some feedback on #18? Thanks.

[sharie]

My first entry. The tag line I was going to add Our knowledge is your value

[baiskee]

http://i16.photobucket.com/albums/b4...omeValue-2.jpg

Thanks

[Coy]

Hi, Coy:

Let's remove the tag lines. I can always add something later.

Thanks!

Greg

removed taglines and added the ®
http://i369.photobucket.com/albums/o...ealty1-2-2.jpg

[GregPriest]

Hi
Here is the revision
® symbol added and the tag line removed.

Hi, Nutz:

After reviewing the latest (and thank you for your changes), we have a few more tweaks we'd like to see:
-Is there a way we can have some black shadowing or outlining of the words "Home Value Realty" that might make the name pop out more and be more readily readable?
-We'd like to see a little more yellowish color on the word "Value", which appears to our eyes to be a little too orange.
-Finally, can you make the background a deeper red? This background also looks too orange to our eyes. The background color of #32 is what we are looking for.

Thank you!

Greg

[GregPriest]

removed taglines and added the ®
http://i369.photobucket.com/albums/o...ealty1-2-2.jpg

Hi, Coy:

After reviewing the latest--which we really appreciate-- we have a tweak we'd like to request to see if this would help the vviewing of the logo from a sign perspective. Is there a way we can have some black shadowing or outlining of the words "Home Value Realty" that might make the name pop out more and be more readily readable?

Thank you!

Greg

[TheNutz]

Hi, Nutz:

After reviewing the latest (and thank you for your changes), we have a few more tweaks we'd like to see:
-Is there a way we can have some black shadowing or outlining of the words "Home Value Realty" that might make the name pop out more and be more readily readable?
-We'd like to see a little more yellowish color on the word "Value", which appears to our eyes to be a little too orange.
-Finally, can you make the background a deeper red? This background also looks too orange to our eyes. The background color of #32 is what we are looking for.

Thank you!

Greg

Hi Greg
Here is the revision you asked
Regards
Daniel

ps: you should know that this design will work in any kind of reddish background you like. If you have the PMS color from your previously logo you could share to us the code so we could show you the result in the exact same colors

[GregPriest]

Hi Greg
Here is the revision you asked
Regards
Daniel

ps: you should know that this design will work in any kind of reddish background you like. If you have the PMS color from your previously logo you could share to us the code so we could show you the result in the exact same colors

Daniel:

Thanks for the quick response! Much appreciated.

We would like the word "Value" even a little more yellow. Also, can the shadowing around the words "Home Value Realty" be somehow made to have these words stand out even more? I'm not sure how to accomplish this, and am open to any ideas. This will be placed on a 28" X 30" yard sign, and we really want the words to be easily readable from cars driving by. We like the new background color--thanks!

Greg

[Coy]

Revision.
I went a step lighter with the blue because it clashed w/ the black to much. I might even suggest going a little lighter on it if used for signage.

are you doing the signs in vynil or printing them?
http://i369.photobucket.com/albums/o...eRealty1-3.jpg

[Coy]

The reason I ask about how the signs will be made is because if it's vinyl we won't want to use any gradiants, if it's printed then the gradiants could be used.
We can even do two versions; one for web, business cards, letter heads with gradiant drop shadows and one for signs w/ no gradiants.
I might even suggest a gray or dark gray in place of the black.

[GregPriest]

Revision.
I went a step lighter with the blue because it clashed w/ the black to much. I might even suggest going a little lighter on it if used for signage.

are you doing the signs in vynil or printing them?
http://i369.photobucket.com/albums/o...eRealty1-3.jpg

Thank you, Coy! For the revisions, and for the prompt response.

The shadowing is exactly what we were looking for. It really makes the words pop and easily readable from a distance. Regarding the blue, I agree, but we are strongly leaning toward the white anyway, as it shows up the best.

The signs will be on both vinyl, as well as on metal. Also, on our website, business cards, letterhead, and anything else we can think to plaster it on.

We have until the end of the day today for the contest, and will be making our final decision ASAP after that.

Thanks again!

Greg

[Coy]

Thank you for the additional information. I'll be off and on speratically throughout the day and will check if any changes are needed, so they can get done asap for you.