Solid Detergent Newsletter - $250 - Dec. 1

[afeig324]

One more thing...please include our website "www.soapbuddy.com"

[Coy]

I'll have updates on this design as requested on Monday since my time today is VERY limited.

[afeig324]

I'll have updates on this design as requested on Monday since my time today is VERY limited.

I'm looking forward to seeing it!

[Jopicasso]

I will try to add an entry soon

[afeig324]

How is everyone doing? Let me know if you have any more questions. I am looking forward to seeing some more updates!

[Coy]

I'll have the changes late today.

[Coy]

Ok added the "http://www.soapbuddy.com", only had patiented capitalized. fixed the applications, increased the size of the product and added some bubbles coming out of the product.
http://i369.photobucket.com/albums/o...SoapBuddy3.jpg

[Coy]

I'd also like to add that I redid your logo so that it would resize a little better with out the use of actual lines needing strokes. Or needing the stroke size of the lines reduced or enlarged to keep the look of the logo.
I hope this is ok w/ afeig324 and with his approval will make it available to all Designers.

[afeig324]

I'd also like to add that I redid your logo so that it would resize a little better with out the use of actual lines needing strokes. Or needing the stroke size of the lines reduced or enlarged to keep the look of the logo.
I hope this is ok w/ afeig324 and with his approval will make it available to all Designers.

I am not really sure what you are talking about with the logo resizing, but it looks good to me in this latest version. All the text looks good too, including the website location. My only concern, still is the product.

Now that there are soap bubbles coming out of the product, the product is not very visible. I really want someone to look at this picture and get a real good idea of how the product works. They need to see the water flowing into the center hole. They need to see the soapy water exiting the smaller holes (without hiding the holes), and they need to see the cylidrical container.

I am not sure how to accomplish this, but hopefully you can!

[afeig324]

One more thing...everytime I lookg at the water fall pouring into the product, I think that there is a streak in the drawing. If possible, can you tweak that. Maybe add a floating faucet as the source. Although, that might clutter the space a bit.

[Coy]

I'll work on those concerns and add a faucet.

What was happening when I went to resize the image you provided there are areas that used stroke sizes and when you went to size up or down it would stay the same so making it smaller would really distort it giving it larger (or smaller) lines. Not really a big deal or anything.

here is the AI file - soapbuddyLOGOredone.ai

and the JPG. - soapbuddyLOGOredone.jpg

[Coy]

http://i369.photobucket.com/albums/o...SoapBuddy4.jpg

[afeig324]

Looks pretty good! Thanks!

[Coy]

I saw a little fix on the applications area where it reads. ".. car with it," that should be all on the same line. I fixed that. If you want to see it let me know and I'll post it up. Just thought I should mention that.

[afeig324]

I saw a little fix on the applications area where it reads. ".. car with it," that should be all on the same line. I fixed that. If you want to see it let me know and I'll post it up. Just thought I should mention that.

I didn't even notice it. I've been looking on my blackberry. Please post the revised version. Thanks!

[Coy]

No problem. Here ya go.
http://i369.photobucket.com/albums/o...apBuddy4-1.jpg

[afeig324]

No problem. Here ya go.
http://i369.photobucket.com/albums/o...apBuddy4-1.jpg

Ok, just when you thought you had it, I go and make some changes...

This newsletter is for a Bar Show. therefore, the audience is bartenders, bar owners, ect. So we need to modify this to show cleaning in a bar scene.

Here is what i am thinking...

First the Applications: they need to only relate to bars. so they should just be "Bar Glassware, "Bar Utensils", Bar Tops", and "Stainless Steel Refrigerators"

Also, The cloudy suds encompassing the bottom half of the drawing, needs to be all be inside a bar sink. I am going to post a picture of a bar sink that has brushes built in.

In the drawing, the suds should be inside the sink, with the brushes sticking out as shown in the picture. The product should be inside the sink, but next to the brushes with the faucet flowing water into it as it currently is.

The whole key to this is, i want someone to look at this drawing and know exactly how this product works.

[afeig324]

<a href='http://www.mediafire.com/?mmkynmmwemn'>http://www.mediafire.com/?mmkynmmwemn</a>

[Coy]

it'll take a little bit to get the changes done but I'm working on it.

[Coy]

OK here are some changes.
V2
http://i369.photobucket.com/albums/o...oapBuddyV2.jpg