
Originally Posted by
IntSysCon
I'm sorry, but this is not in the right direction.
The colors and pictures are really nice; the leaderboard looks good; and the placement of the login box is great.
However, football needs a presence.
- The site should talk depict football as much as, or even more than, it depicts golf.
- Also, your design is missing one of the key elements that we asked for, which is the mention of prize money. We think that by announcing cash prizes, we will significantly increase our membership this year, so we want that information to be very visible.
- Otherwise, the beauty of your design has created something that we feel is not functional. It doesn't give the user any indication as to which things are "clickable" and which are not. It also does not draw the visitors eye to the explanation about the site.
If I look at this site from across the room, I will think it's a site for a golf course - because the golf course picture is the focal point. The visitor needs to see, from across the room, that this is some sort of "fantasy football" game site where cash prizes are awarded. With your design, we believe people will say "that's a pretty girl on a pretty golf course" and click away because they don't know what they're looking at.
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