HomeFreedom.Com -$300-April 23

[nevadabadgirl]

I am going to reopen this contest to new concepts, due to extenuating circumstances (having a baby in the middle of a contest is extenuating )

Congratulations, Club3006!

The new deadline is: April 23.

Club3006, if this is too late for you, please let me know and I will change it.

[Dragonfly]

Heres is another idea based on my first concept. Would you like a sun there too?

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v3...o/DC/HF_02.jpg

[AK-Sultan]

Hi,
My revision :

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r...g/HF_v1-3q.jpg

Thank you

[Dragonfly]

My concept #3

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v3...o/DC/HF_03.jpg

[AK-Sultan]

Hi,

My second concept :

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r...eg/HF_v2-0.jpg

Feedback is appreciated.

Thank you .

A.K.

[nhr]

Hello

Version #1 (extreme) - Home Kick:

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b9...reedom_nhr.png

[nhr]

Version #2 (regular) - Freedom:

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b9...eedom2_nhr.png

Thank you.

[Club3006]

WOW! - Now we're really getting somewhere. I wrote this long diatribe, then I refreshed and there were a bunch more designs!


DragonFly - I friggin' love you're work. In my initial post before seeing your updates, I said, "after REALLY studying your design over the last several days, I feel like its a bit "cartoony."

But after seeing the new posts, especially #24, I must say, I'm changing my tune! Just a couple things...

1. Do you think you could make the person a little bigger, so that its left hand actually extends above the sun? Can you make the person just "a little bit more" (not a lot) like AK-Sultans?

2. Can we play with the font colors? ....maybe more gradient? Are you liking the gray color for ".com"?

AK-Sultan - You're first design really moved me. And the the revision in #18 is appreciated. It is a clean and compelling design.

Then your revisions in 23 and 25 while very creative, seem to clutter your otherwise clutter-free design. I'll tell ya what I do like - I'm digging how you added a bit more character to the house in 23 and 25.

What I would like to see however are some more color combinations. Perhaps something with a sparkling gold feel in "Freedom" I don't know what would match with the gold...but I'd like to see it.

NHR - I like the colors and I sincerely appreciate your efforts. I must say however that while I "get" the kicking part - I think the person is a bit too abstract - for lack of a better word. I mean, I don't think we need to hit our viewers over the head, but I think most would not get the "kick." The figure looks like he's doing a balancing act rather than kicking.

I like the second design a bit better, but again - the figure looks like he's sliding down the swoosh - rather than being freed of his house problems.

[Dragonfly]

Thanks for the feedback!
I'll be working on the requested changes.

[greenidentity]

Hi, Club3006, congratulations for your baby. I have ditched the old design and here is my new approach.

http://i15.photobucket.com/albums/a3...99/HF_logo.png

[AK-Sultan]

Thank you very much for your feedback.

I this gold color revisions for " Freedom " as requested :

1- Flat : light Gold + Blue
2- Glossy : light gold + blue
3- Glossy : Gold + blue
4- Glossy : Gold + green

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r...ineg/HF-G1.jpg

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r...ineg/HF-G2.jpg

Feedback is appreciated.

Thank you

[Dragonfly]

My revisions

Two options for the person and more gradient fx.
I put the .com in gray to give the name more emphasis but it can be black as well.

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v3.../DC/HF_03b.jpg

[Dragonfly]

Some gamma variations

http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v3.../DC/HF_03c.jpg

[Club3006]

Folks:

I've not been ignoring - I've been digesting your ideas and polling my friends and family. Here's my thoughts...

DragonFly - I love your revsions! Its a great variation on the original theme and I like the figure better.

AK-Sultan - I thank you for the color variations. I really dig your concepts as well! I was actually wanting to see what the Freedom would look like in more of a 3-D gold. I mean to make it look like real gold. I don't know how you do it, but I've seen it done.

[AK-Sultan]

Folks:
AK-Sultan - I thank you for the color variations. I really dig your concepts as well! I was actually wanting to see what the Freedom would look like in more of a 3-D gold. I mean to make it look like real gold. I don't know how you do it, but I've seen it done.

Hi,

Thank you very much for your feedback .

I will make a revision for #3 in my previous samples to give it more gold effect.

Thank you

[greenidentity]

Folks:

I've not been ignoring - I've been digesting your ideas and polling my friends and family. Here's my thoughts...

DragonFly - I love your revsions! Its a great variation on the original theme and I like the figure better.

AK-Sultan - I thank you for the color variations. I really dig your concepts as well! I was actually wanting to see what the Freedom would look like in more of a 3-D gold. I mean to make it look like real gold. I don't know how you do it, but I've seen it done.

Any feedback on my new design?

[nhr]

Thank you for the feedback & revisions:

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b9...edom21_nhr.png

[nhr]

http://i17.photobucket.com/albums/b9...edom22_nhr.png

[AK-Sultan]

Hi,

I was actually wanting to see what the Freedom would look like in more of a 3-D gold. I mean to make it look like real gold. I don't know how you do it, but I've seen it done.

My revision: 24K Gold Plated

http://i147.photobucket.com/albums/r...-Gold_zrev.jpg

Feedback is appreciated.

A.K

[Club3006]

DragonFly!

Congrats to all who participated. It was really a difficult decision.

AK-Sultan - I'd like to speak with you after the contest.

Craig