I've just finished my new portfolio an I am anxious to hear what you think about it. Would like to get some constructive critique if you are up for it.
So fire at will
Nenad Mladenovicâ„¢
New Design Portfolio
Hi,I've just finished my new portfolio an I am anxious to hear what you think about it. Would like...
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shoxMeister
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Posted 19 May 2009 - 04:55 PM
Hi,
I've just finished my new portfolio an I am anxious to hear what you think about it. Would like to get some constructive critique if you are up for it.
So fire at will
Nenad Mladenovicâ„¢
I've just finished my new portfolio an I am anxious to hear what you think about it. Would like to get some constructive critique if you are up for it.
So fire at will
Nenad Mladenovicâ„¢
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Coy
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Posted 19 May 2009 - 09:21 PM
I like the layout of the site and the navigation is nice as well.
Looked through a few of your pieces and they looked good.
KKNIS logo for the basketball team reminds me of another bball logo just not sure which one. (i'm not a big bball fan)
Looked through a few of your pieces and they looked good.
KKNIS logo for the basketball team reminds me of another bball logo just not sure which one. (i'm not a big bball fan)
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Posted 20 May 2009 - 05:40 AM
I agree, layout is good and clean but not sure of the navigation. I don't know if it is only in my browser but I wasn't able to browse the design in the gallery. I only see cover titles even if I click the numbers like 1, 2 or 3. I am using firefox..
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oviska
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Posted 20 May 2009 - 10:55 AM
Hey,
I really like the clean design, and the minimalistic approach.
I think the navigation system is cool too, but i must admit that probably many people will find it a bit difficult at first.
Anyway excellent work, congrats!
Ovidiu
I really like the clean design, and the minimalistic approach.
I think the navigation system is cool too, but i must admit that probably many people will find it a bit difficult at first.
Anyway excellent work, congrats!
Ovidiu
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shoxMeister
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Posted 23 May 2009 - 09:10 AM
Guys, I'd like to thank you all for the critique. It helped a lot. Yeah, navigation should probably be a bit better, and more user friendly, but it looks that I've chosen looks over functionality once again.
Thanks again
Thanks again
Yup, but I'm not sure that is too good of a code, because it's not xml, it's pure as2, so it took me quite a while to code it.Simply stunning! Have you coded flash by yourself?
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igorad
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Posted 23 May 2009 - 09:26 AM
have U seen your website on a 24" monitor? (the white area it's not set to justify (left-right)).
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shoxMeister
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Missed that one. . .
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shoxMeister
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Posted 05 June 2009 - 10:40 PM
love the layout dude- and very neat designs, too!
10x m8
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.:FMD
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Posted 06 June 2009 - 01:25 AM
10x m8
Have to give it to you bro, looks good. I really like how you give them a tiny peek of what the design is with the little slide out.
However, I really like your shox website. The 3d animation integrated is dope. Maybe we can talk later and possibly you can lead me to some good tuts. I have been staying away from flash but I would like to be able to make some small elements such as a nav bar or just a flash header for my website.
Now back to your port, Couple suggestions...
Some of your designs you don't show the entire design. You only show close ups of it. I think if I was a potential employer or client, I would want to see the entire composition. It will definitely give the viewer an Idea of what they are looking at.
Thats really all I got for yah, but again, super clean site, less is more and you nailed it.
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eienblue25
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Posted 11 June 2009 - 01:01 PM
oh come on, that was really, really, really, really, awesome dude XD
great works too
great works too
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