some works for you to criticize

[mookie]

would appreciate any comments on this stuff

www.behance.net/mookie

[Ranggamati]

Hello

You are good comments. i am happy man some work is best but some problem.


Thanks




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[brandyarnold]

Hi Mookie! Thanks for sharing your portfolio with us! You have some really great stuff in there, I really like the typography treatments in the magazine layout - of course, i can't read what it says, so can't comment on much more than the appearance, and I really liked it.

Your sketches are good too. I think you just really need to add more stuff! It just felt a bit unfinished (not your work, but the portfolio).

Let us know when you add to it, I'm sure you'll get more comments/feedback when we have more to look at.

Good luck!

[mookie]

thanks for the feedback
i'm going to update my portfolio as soon as things worth being published are made

[GoldenZ]

Great designs with a sensitive touches, I loved the buildings drawing, it reminds me of a friend who draw Gotham City from batman movie with Photoshop. However I didn't love the white outlined of the box on the woodenworld, but the other works looks great, well done.

Thanks for sharing,
-Amr

[insane]

I like the designs... simple strong yet unique