here i'm after a while and i need you're help.
i've finished my last project "Black Sheep Festival" and of course i would like u 2 comment this one:
http://www.crnaovca.com.hr
please take no prisoners
thx
lena
Black Sheep Festival
hi guys,here i'm after a while and i need you're help. i've finished my last project "Black...
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DreamSky
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Posted 24 April 2008 - 07:17 AM
Hi lena,
I like it a lot, the festival too - looks like something I'd love to visit
I only noticed that only the Hrvatski and the English languages work, I guess you haven't finished the others yet.
Also, in the English version you might want to change the "i hladno pivo" to "and cold drinks" or "and cold beer" (I am not sure what "pivo" is
) so that will be in English too.
I like it a lot, the festival too - looks like something I'd love to visit
I only noticed that only the Hrvatski and the English languages work, I guess you haven't finished the others yet.
Also, in the English version you might want to change the "i hladno pivo" to "and cold drinks" or "and cold beer" (I am not sure what "pivo" is
) so that will be in English too.
and also hladno pivo means cold beer.
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HeavenlyAzul
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Posted 30 April 2008 - 03:09 PM
Wow, Lena! I think it looks very nice and entertaining. I also like the subtle animations, like the bubbles in the mug, the sun, and the parasailing sheep. The only thing that bothers me is the green outline ont he black sheep's head. But its not glaring and doesn't really take away from the overall design.
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arcticsnpr
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Posted 30 May 2008 - 05:01 AM
Well done. There is one thing that throws me off. For some reason, the mountains in the back are throwing me off, like it's a slightly different style than the bushes and sheep.
Really great though
Really great though
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#11
tsmith
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Posted 31 May 2008 - 09:04 PM
I really like it.
Only recommendation I can offer is to add a line spacing between the menu items, as they are fairly close to each other.
Edit: Or, if you do not with to increasing the line spacing, you could always remove the underline (text-decoration) and achieve the same result. This might actually be a better resolution.
Only recommendation I can offer is to add a line spacing between the menu items, as they are fairly close to each other.
Edit: Or, if you do not with to increasing the line spacing, you could always remove the underline (text-decoration) and achieve the same result. This might actually be a better resolution.
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