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    New logo

    Hello! I've been working on my new logo. What do you think about it?


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    Looks good!

    If I were designing it, I would:

    - Shrink or get rid of the orange circle within the letter "b"
    - Make the binary numbers stand out more -- darker coloring
    - Give the eggs some more values to define the shape of the egg
    - (Possibly) Shrink the egg logo's, but the detail would be lost if I were to do that, too

    I like the black and white look. The typography works for me.

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    I think it's a cool idea. I might make the lines on the eggs less detailed and more crisp... the simpler the better. Those small details, especially, can easily get lost when a logo is reproduced in black and white, on a photocopy for example.

    I like the orange color.

    One thing I don't like is how the hard edges inside the letter "b" look next to the round, orange eye. Just doesn't feel right.

    Also, try it out on a white background, too, to make sure it is versatile.

    Nice concept, though. I think it just needs some ironing.

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    Thanks both for your comments! They are of great help

    I keep working on it.

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    The 2nd egg looks funny. I think it just needs more definition. I'm just confused on what exactly of the (chic?) is coming out? Just the hair/feathurs/fur w/e... Though, great idea. nice way to incorporate both the birth and coding. I agree mostly with what was previously said...

    though also, maybe in the eggs, put a VERY light gray (noticable) so that it looks like a little shading? I think that will spice it up

    EDIT: I just thought of maybe having a piece of the egg broken off and have the inside of the eggshell (the piece that is showing on the "ground") have all the 11001010100111's..... maybe idk? just a thought. goodluck!
    Last edited by radical1321; 05-16-2008 at 01:28 AM. Reason: Quick Thought

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    Hi!

    I think the two eggs shoul be more simplifyed, more lice icons...otherwise itīs really nice!
    greetings,

    Mike

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    I like it, but I'm confused about what's going on. What is the logo for? I agree about the animal being hatched - this needs to be more clear. I didn't realize there was binary code on the eggs at first until I read the other comments. If it's important to the brand, then I would make them larger or darker. They don't look very good on the eggs, so maybe move them somewhere else if they need to be there?

    Also, I agree that the orange circle in 'birth' isn't necessary.

    Good job though!
    Anna

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    i like the colors that you've used. and also the font. but the binary digits on the egg look very out of place, like you had to put them there to relate it to codes, and also the eggs look a little scary, maybe you could try more variations of the egg with the the binary digits.
    and yes as everybody has said, the orange circle seems unnecessary, but if you really awant it maybe you can fit in shape with the b.

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    great concept! I like the ideas you've presented. I like the colors, too.

    There is too much going on, I think. Simplify. Develop one of the ideas. Focus on the eye in the b. Make it more obvious as to what it is. Nix the eggs. OR develop a single egg into your icon, simplifying and honing it. Leave the b unadorned, work on the kerning or explore a few other fonts.

    Keep up the good work!
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    Quote Originally Posted by psygn View Post
    Looks good!

    If I were designing it, I would:

    - Shrink or get rid of the orange circle within the letter "b"
    - Make the binary numbers stand out more -- darker coloring
    - Give the eggs some more values to define the shape of the egg
    - (Possibly) Shrink the egg logo's, but the detail would be lost if I were to do that, too

    I like the black and white look. The typography works for me.
    I agree but I'd find a way to include the binary numbers without putting them on the egg

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    i think there might be a little too much going on, the concept and colors work good but try to simplify it a bit more

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    It seems that most are agreed-- simplification is necessary. Perhaps you should incorporate the egg concept into the lettering via replacing the "o" in code with one of the egg designs. Keep it simple.

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    It's almost a bit creepy, especially with that little eye in the "b".
    Would be cool to see the eggs a bit more stylized.

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