Help with logo

[Sour]

I have been trying to redesign my logo. Any feedback or suggestions would be much appreciated.

[takethetrain]

If you're just asking which one we like best, then for me, it's number 4 or 5. In number four, the simplified slices (or whatever you'd call them) go better with the outline. In number 5, they go better with that outline (though I still think they could be simplified a bit). But without more information on your brand, I guess I can't get more specific than that.

[KHDZN]

I have to agree that I like #4 & #5 as well. Those designs seems to reflect your style best -- great website by the way. Why do you want to redesign the logo? My only suggestion would be to put a tagline under the SOUR mark -- I wouldn't know that you are a design firm by looking at the mark by itself.

[vdubdesign]

I think the font choice for 1, 4, and 5 is most suited for your theme or "sour", and KHDZN is right that it seems to fit your style best.

I would go with a simpler version of number 5-- not so detailed, but more than number 4.

To me it is still missing something-- perhaps a tagline like someone previously suggested... I was thinking of just putting "designs" underneath of the SOUR just to give your logo some context to. Pretty interesting idea of a "sour" design firm.

[Chung Dha]

Got to agree with them 1,4,5 are best concepts. They kind of graffiti like and very playful. However I want to see the other 3 with kind of grain effect on then like a ruff sprayed logo, because they look to smooth and to perfect.

[Maxson]

1st one actually looks great, but the font is kinda boring. You could try and fuse 1 with 3 or 6

[Winter artwork]

5 - round out the drips and make the text outline thicker

6 - I actually kinda like this one, just needs some 'grundging"
I'd try putting it in a yellow, jagged edged box and switch the text color to white

[ambitiongirl]

I love 3 or 6! The font you used is perfect. The font used in 1, 4, and 5 is the reason why people hate comic sans so much .

[Unique]

5,6
thohw the inner slices are better in 4.

i really liked the art deco in 6 and how you combined it with the lemon.

and about the yellow... to bright for me (or do you intend to use it on a deifferent bg color?)

i think i've seen more logos like 4 or 5, but 6 is more special

[vld]

If I would have to chose between 1, 4 and 5 I would go with #1, but IMHO #6 has more potential.

Cheers.

[jpa]

Hi. Have you thought the colour could be too agresive?

Saludos!

[Pilar_Robledo]

Hi! I like 3 and 6. Also work more with the colour. this yellow is very strong.
Maybe you can use a diferente yellow, lima green, and sweet orange...

good luck!

[stlthriot]

3 and 6 are my favorites as well! 3 especially with the little lemon slice above the type. Good work!