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Personal Logo! - What do you think?

Alright so here it is guys. It is a logotype I created for my own design company I will be opening soon....

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#1 Carbon

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Posted 27 November 2008 - 03:11 AM

Alright so here it is guys. It is a logotype I created for my own design company I will be opening soon. This is going to go on the website, business card, letter head, etc. The name of my company is Brandia, something original. What I wanted to portray here was versatility and I did that throughout the colors used.

Here is a one color version:

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Here is the logo in action on our website header, this one also has the color:

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The website and everything is not up yet as of yet. We should be launching very soon! I'll keep you guys updated. So what do you guys think? Any suggestions? All criticism is welcome

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#2 KHDZN

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Posted 27 November 2008 - 11:45 PM

The B looks disconnected from the rest of the logo to me. And how will the logo look when it is reduced in size? I think the dots will run together and not reproduce very well small. I do like the red/gray color palette.

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#3 _Redrum

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Posted 28 November 2008 - 02:03 AM

Good way to put it KHDZN (disconnected). I was thinking the same thing the other day but didn't have the right words with which to express it. So I'll just second your comment

One other thing is that it may be best to focus either on the B or the i. Otherwise there are two separate ideas, both drawing attention away from each other.

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#4 Guest_Gerhard Schlee_*

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Posted 28 November 2008 - 02:18 AM

I think the "B" doesn't need to be inclinated, it feels disconnected, as KHDZN said... and there are too many dots in there! Perhaps you could try forming the "B" with the same "i" dot, even if you modify it? And I liked better the grey/red color scheme! I think that grey would look great with any other contrasting color!

Keep it up!

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#5 Carbon

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Posted 02 December 2008 - 03:54 AM

Thanks guys, I'll make the appropriate changes and take your suggestions into consideration. I will let you guys what I come up with when I am done

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#6 geek

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Posted 02 December 2008 - 06:15 AM

I agree with all the comments.

I can see 3 brand marks on your logo. The B - which is not related to the whole context. The font - which needs some rework on the kerning or maybe customizing it will look great. The small round colorful dot on the 'i'. All these 3 are not connected with each other and lacks branding.

Looking forward to see the next version.

Good luck

and thanks for sharing your milestone to us.

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#7 slbergh

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Posted 04 December 2008 - 06:55 AM

I'm going to echo the other comments about the disconnection. To me, the "randia" seems to stand out much more than the "B" does.

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#8 chandro

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Posted 23 December 2008 - 11:39 PM

yes KHDZN is right, the dots may look different if reduce. thoug it has a punch to it

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#9 EdwardRuvalcaba

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Posted 15 January 2009 - 08:18 PM

I love it if i were to see it somewhere else i will remember it

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#10 jecrt

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Posted 15 January 2009 - 10:13 PM

I feel like the B is pulling away from randia - due to the slant/italics. I also kinda wish that the smaller dots in the shoulder/bowls of the B were also in the mainstroke