Flyer Design - Feedback Sought

[davidbenpark]

Hi folks,

I have another design for you to peruse and seek some of your juicy feedback to gnaw on like bubblegum! It is a flyer for which the purpose is quite self-explanatory.





Thanks again!

[_Redrum]

some of your juicy feedback to gnaw on like bubblegum

Never heard it put like that before. Don't see a pic [X].

[architorch]

I really dig the left pane. The right side loses me slightly. Perhaps a simple font change?

[davidbenpark]

Never heard it put like that before. Don't see a pic [X].

Hey Redrum - do you see it now? If other people can't see it please let me know.

Oh, and thanks for the comment person above ^^^. I changed the right pane making the text more graphicy (covered in snow) and the background more textured. It's all good though cos it's just a freebie for a uni mate. I'll upload it when I get a chance.

Cheers all!

[Chung Dha]

Left looks good but right should have some element of left so it fits together better. And on the right don't like what you have done with the kerning is looks messy this way. Better use different font sizes to put them in a box shape also it makes few words more important then others.

[artviolator]

Front: Lose the stars near the board. Use some vectors around the bord [ Royalty Free Stock Vector Art & Illustrations: Spring in green | iStockphoto.com ], something like that. It will give the front the feel of motion. In the backround put a rainbow, something colourfull.
Back: lose the corners. take tha shape of the dude with the snowbord and put it on the bottom right corner. Use a stronger font. Take the mountain from the front and put it in the back, faded [50% or smth like that].

[EdwardRuvalcaba]

i love the picture but agree with architorch the font is too dull try to fit the style on the left to the one on the right add the stars and be more discriptive about the society.

[jecrt]

I'm not seeing anything? am I crazy??