I have another design for you to peruse and seek some of your juicy feedback to gnaw on like bubblegum! It is a flyer for which the purpose is quite self-explanatory.
Thanks again!
Flyer Design - Feedback Sought
Hi folks,I have another design for you to peruse and seek some of your juicy feedback to gnaw on like...
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davidbenpark
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Apprentice Designer
Posted 24 December 2008 - 07:19 AM
Never heard it put like that before. Don't see a pic [X].
Hey Redrum - do you see it now? If other people can't see it please let me know.
Oh, and thanks for the comment person above ^^^. I changed the right pane making the text more graphicy (covered in snow) and the background more textured. It's all good though cos it's just a freebie for a uni mate. I'll upload it when I get a chance.
Cheers all!
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Chung Dha
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Guru
Posted 26 December 2008 - 05:19 PM
Left looks good but right should have some element of left so it fits together better. And on the right don't like what you have done with the kerning is looks messy this way. Better use different font sizes to put them in a box shape also it makes few words more important then others.
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artviolator
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Posted 13 January 2009 - 02:30 PM
Front: Lose the stars near the board. Use some vectors around the bord [ Royalty Free Stock Vector Art & Illustrations: Spring in green | iStockphoto.com ], something like that. It will give the front the feel of motion. In the backround put a rainbow, something colourfull.
Back: lose the corners. take tha shape of the dude with the snowbord and put it on the bottom right corner. Use a stronger font. Take the mountain from the front and put it in the back, faded [50% or smth like that].
Back: lose the corners. take tha shape of the dude with the snowbord and put it on the bottom right corner. Use a stronger font. Take the mountain from the front and put it in the back, faded [50% or smth like that].
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