Logo opinion needed

[Chung Dha]

Please look at the logo's and tell me which you find the best and which is best to read FJS. Or any other advice to to put FJS together.

[a9609067]

i feel that the bottom three work quite well. but if i really have to choose one, i will take the middle.

[rinaldidesigns]

bottom rite

[brian_lsf]

well actually if you didn't say it's FJS, i wouldn't have seen the F at all, except maybe the 3rd one but is still tricky, it's more like rjs

The thing is the F's second arm is too square, maybe should be more rectangle, and nothing actually shows that it is supposed to be connected to the F

Personally i don't like the bottom 3, the S messes with the proportions between the letters and the uppercase and lowercase difference makes it look weird

I prefer the first row 2nd one because the 's' adds some dimension to the logo but there's still the F problem and the 's' has to be improved

[_Redrum]

Played around with this concept a bit Seems there's some negative space between the F and S ...and it looks awfully J-like. Seemed to work out ok on my screen.

[PixelFuze]

To me the bottom left works best right now. It is mt most distinct out of the 6. Try working on the F more, it is actually pretty hard to make it out in all of them. Anyways best of luck with this !

[GRAF1CS]

bottom right aswell

[jecrt]

I don't get the "F" very well at all. The cross bar on the F seems disconnected, so I just have a problem seeing it. (especially since the other letters are solid/one piece.

[awhipl]

what if you connect the second arm of the F and increase the J size a bit?

it's definitely difficult to see the F without looking for it

[willylorbo]

I read just "IS" !

[KHDZN]

Bottom left

[DreamSky]

I would go for the bottom right the most. Though I would still work a little bit more in defining the F. Now the dot of the "j" does not quite seem like part of the F so the F is not as readable as the other two letters.

Anyways, definitely the bottom right

[Louise]

hi there

the 'f' is the hard bit to read. what if you don't have a gap to the left of the arm? (ie so the dot of j is actually connected to the 'f'?)

or you could join the arm to the 's' perhaps, so it sticks out to the right?

perhaps also try making the s taller to square the shape off?

personally i prefer the bottom right at present, but as mentioned the 'f' really does need a bit more legibility.

hope that helps!

[Gerhard Schlee]

I would do it like this:

[willylorbo]

The F now is more recognizable!

[brian_lsf]

but it's not 'j' anymore...

[fs_014]

since i my initials r FJS. . have made one. .
this is how i hav done it. .

[jtwant]

To be entirely honest I looked at the choices before I read your blurb which explains that it says "FJS" but I wasn't able to decipher that from the image itself. Try playing with colors, if possible. If not, perhaps spacial and size differences would make it clearer. You also might try putting the "j" in blackout outline. Just a few ideas, hope that helps...

[Dongerz]

Is this too obvious?

[jtwant]

I think that's good! I might (might) dot the j with a small white dot or a small white square dot outline set inside the "F"

try that, see what happens.