Scorpion Lounge, Logo design

[SMJdesign]

let me know what you think, this is a wip.

Bar & Dancefloor!

[Coy]

The scorpion for the 's' looks more lobster-ish to me and also makes the logo read corpion since it barley makes an S shape.

Maybe play with the C in scorpion since that is the natural shape to a scorpion.
the scorpions pinchers look kinda like fingers on pinchers..

I do like the font it has a fun feel to it.

I'm not trying to sound mean, just my HONEST opion.

[SMJdesign]

Thank you for the quick feedback, No offense taken. I enjoy constructive criticism. i'll repost in a bit

[Dongerz]

I like the fire-y colors. I agree that the image doesn't shape the "S" enough. It might be more obvious if you used the scorpion to form the "p" instead. I like the vibe though! Kinda voodoo-ish.



PS- I am up for voting. Please go to http://www.designcontest.com/forum/a...our-votes.html and vote! Thanks for taking the time.