Once again Total Joy Designs Logo

Here is another go just font

I like the 3rd one just because you can read Joy easier. Although if it was in color that might help too. also i think the outline on the T is to thick compared to the rest of the letters... hope that helps!

I like the 3rd one just because you can read Joy easier. Although if it was in color that might help too. also i think the outline on the T is to thick compared to the rest of the letters... hope that helps!

Yes i am going to add color later probably red to joy and the i in designs but uh just want to get the uh shape and stuff first and i agree i dont know what to do about that though the Total is rather thick ..... but thanks!

I think this is much better start - it definitely gives off a "joyful" feeling. I agree with rockhart about the "joy" being difficult to read and the weight of the stroke on the "T".

I think the overly tight kerning isn't helping with the legibility, though. The "joy" being in the whimsical font is a step in the right direction, but it kinda loses its punch since it's the same font as Total & designs. What if you use a more conventional font for those two words and build them around the whimsical "joy"? Just a suggestion.

what kind of design do you do? graphic design or some other kind of design (apparel, interior, etc.)?

overall, though - you're on the right track. good job!

I agree, this one seems to be more on the right track.

I'd go with the third one as well. It clearly shows off the heart-shaped tittle, which is a distinguishing characteristic in this design. Believe it or not, that's the kind of thing people tend to latch onto when they see a logo.

To improve a bit, try tweaking the spacing between the letters. I would recommend using the spacing that exists between "ign" in the word "Designs" - it looks about right. Also, consider whether this design is sending the correct message, whatever you chose it to be. Currently its putting out a toy-like, youthful vibe, which may or may not be beneficial to you, based on the type of work that you plan to produce. The most important thing is to be true to yourself - prospects will sense this and be attracted to it.