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    Registered User Sandersonia is on a distinguished road
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    Kiwi Groove logo, under revision

    I know this is my second quick post, but don't hate me! I need to finish this quickly (my finals are coming up soon) and any feedback would be nice.

    The logo is for a website designed for music downloads. Here are three designs I came up with. Suggestions? What sucks? (I'm going to comment more, but school is quite literally killing me.)
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    I like second and third, though in second I'd have those green bubbles follow the shade style of kiwi-speakers instead simple gradients, giving them position in space, if you know what I mean. Fonts also bug me a bit, though I can't point it what it is that bothers my vision about it.
    Hope it helps...
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    I think the general idea is fairly solid. Experiment with some different font selections and maybe simplify some of the elements a bit.

    Just a small observation, but you do have two 'o's right beside each other (groove). A simplified version of your kiwi headphones could easily replace those two letters.

    Good luck.

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    Agree with the two above me...I love the name because you could really incorporate like drums and dancing but I am not a big fan of the dull colors even though I know that is the color of a kiwi...so it is probably just me cause I love brights with black

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    I am actually digging the color palette - the font, not so much. I would agree with some more simplification and thinking about a black and white version. Sometimes a great color logo is almost illegible on a xeroxed piece of paper. Will you be creating support elements for the logo (website, letterhead business cards) sometimes I like to have that idea in the back of my head - thinking how these elements can support a wider range of materials.

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    You have WAY too much going on. Stick with the kiwi graphic with simple type. This will let your illustration shine and stand out.

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    why dont you try to use (in the first one) the headphones as the double oo ?

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    It's a good idea, but maybe the design needs some tidying up. Like changing the font to a cleaner one. That would give the design some contrast.
    If you like the font a lot, try to link the graphic and the type, so that they make a single element, maybe with a stroke. Also try to change the font size.
    The color palette is a good one in my opinion.

    Hope that helps !

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