Total Joy Designs.com Logo once again...

[TheDreamer_EJoy]

Ok i dont like this yet but something like this....

[deleted member]

the logo just doesn't' seem to flow well ... also the outlines are kind of distracting. why not fill them in w/ color (might help) also I feel that the "Joy" text doesn't fit well with the rest of it... hope this helps!

[TheDreamer_EJoy]

I agree i dont like the outline but uh i think the fonts work fine well how does this look? just plain

[Coy]

for some reason none of it looks good to me. The underline thing under total just doesn't fit. the font contrasts give me a headace when I look at it. The descender on the g in design look off.

I'd say start over. It's apparent that you want JOY to stand out more so than the rest of the design. I'd say Draw/sketch out the word joy to something that looks good to you then use a standard ol Arial or Times font that may give you the feel I think you're looking for. After that play w/ some other fonts.

Hope this helps as I'm not trying to be rude or anything of the sorts. just honest.

Edit: I like the filled in version better it helped alot. But still think you should start over with a unique 'JOY'.

[Maxson]

The first one could work, but still, too much going on for my taste.