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10-20-2009 01:31 AM #1Registered User
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Own Project
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10-20-2009 11:29 AM #2Elite Designer
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to be truely honest I feel it just doesn't work and it's a bit difficult to read.
I think you could come up with something alot better using the word vertical.
sorry I couldn't come up with something more helpful, just think you should start over.
Is this going to be a brand for your self?
If so then what does vertical say about you? how do you want people to see you when they see your image?Be sure and check out all the great designs in the Community Contests!
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10-21-2009 12:27 PM #3Registered User
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I actually thought there were 2 T's, but I still read it as Vertical lol. Hmmmm. Maybe try to make the letters progressively taller until you get to the T, then make them smaller after it? I guess I would have to know a little bit more about what it is you're doing.
Good Luck.
J
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10-22-2009 09:04 AM #4Registered User
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Originally Posted by jmillgraphics
I agree, it would be a lot easier to give feedback with more background information first. Also, have you thought about making the word "vertical" aligned vertically instead of horizontally? It would give you a fresh new perspective and be true to its name.Designs by Jenna Sheffler: Professional portfolio
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10-22-2009 05:53 PM #5Registered User
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Basically, it represents my mates talking smackas. The word vertical comes into play because when my mates talk smackas everyone raises their hands, (Haring, which means talking smackas, so the hand raised is vertical). And so yeah this is where i got the word vertical.
jmillgraphics i get what your saying. I think i should make the VER/CAL talker and skinnier. Though, i was trying to create the T/I very tall skinny look.
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10-29-2009 08:45 PM #6Registered User
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I like it. It has a nice sharp clean look. And the colors go together really well.
But I do agree that having it aligned vertically. That would look pretty cool.
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10-30-2009 12:50 PM #7Elite Designer
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I would make it a bit like this:
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10-30-2009 12:54 PM #8Elite Designer
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10-30-2009 01:42 PM #9Registered User
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it's hard to read, it's confusing ...looks like a double T or maybe the color contrast doesn't help .
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12-16-2009 02:07 AM #10Registered User
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Logo looks like Pi in mathematics -3,14
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