I'll give you my honest feedback. I'm not here to hender you in any way but to hopefully help you out.
I think your shading for starting out is ok... I see alot of areas where the gradiations need to be fine tuned a bit.. like the arm with the cig in the hand and the bottom of the hair is much to dark IMO..
I think you need to work on the hands some but hands are really hard to draw.. but we do have someone that posted a tutorial that may help you with that.
How to draw a human hand ..
The face is really bright compaired to the rest of the drawing and could use some shading it just stands out and feels a bit flat.. adding some good shading to the nose would also help it look less like it's broken or off center.
here is a link to a post with some tutorials on eye it may help them pop a little more maybe?
drawing eyes. as they are just a bit lifeless.
I do like the highlight or "sheen" from the hair that you did and think the type of blending you used there could really help if done throughout the entire drawing.
I usually don't draw people cause I'm really critical about it exspecially for myself.. Out of maybe 100 real life people type drawings I have drawn; I've only been please with may one or two.
keep up the good work and keep at it.
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