please review this site

[paco18ch]

Hello, i wanna show you my wordpress blog, this is in progrees , and spanish, but i think that maybe you can tell me what do you think, and how can i improve it??.
thx anyway.

the url is
Omega Imagine

[yodah]

Hello!

I would go for a different border around the boxes, instead of the white squares I would try something more exciting, maybe rounded, with different color. Also, some kind of background for the box titles would make them 'jump out' more - I would even replace the box titles with images - with Photoshop one can give more visual flavor. I would also replace the 'Read more' links with an image button - as this button needs to be more 'stick out', instead of the generic feeling I get with the gray box and white text. Finally, I would try a smaller font size for the main text and the dates under the pictures, and set the text alignment to 'justify' in all boxes.

Just some thoughts. I hope it helps...

[paco18ch]

thanks yodah
anyone??

[aset]

Hello,
I also think your body font needs work i would maybe make it a little smaller and maybe a bit lighter style, and yes you need to make the headings of your boxes stand out more.
I think the boxes would look good even if they were just different colours, maybe use the ones from your header?
Not too bad though.

I'm going to try web design soon as well.

[cclark413]

I like the feel, just too bad I don't speak fluent Spanish

[caprice]

Hi Paco

Very interesting Design! But I would like to focus on ergonomy:
As we open the page, we find 3 blocks with 3 different contents. then, the receiver of your communication have to read and then choose where to click.
I think you have to choose for the reader, the most relevant article and give it a wider place
"Los mejores empaques del 2010" for example, would bring the reader into the content and keep him in your website.

Usually too many content at the same place disturb the reader

Bye

[KihnDesigns]

I like the first page layout, it keeps the rule of thirds and violates it with a couple boxes taking more than one third. the sub pages though I think need a little more work. If you could find a way to tie the two columns together but still being divided (for example a vertical line) on the same page, i think it would give the sub pages a better feel. Right now in my opinion they have a unbalanced feel as soon as you get past the right box. The only other thing I see that I would change is the bottom links. These get lost with all the graphics going on in the bottom of the pages. Maybe tie them all in together in a grey box might help them stand out more. All in all, good start, and as previously mention, too bad I don't speak Spanish .

[patrakliski]

I like the style and the concept of the site, but I don't think that the size of font is good, you can try with some smaller size of font, but don't change the type of fonts, i like it

[paco18ch]

thanks for your help

[Rockula]

Hello! xD
Im liking it, i would change the font, and the justified text, creates gaps in the sentences =S
I really like that flash thing in the bottom corner xD
Oh and i like the logo a lot.

[KihnDesigns]

Really like the changes. I think the subpages look a lot more "layed-out" has a more balanced feel to it. I like the new background. Not as busy as the old one (which is a good thing) but it has just enough to make it interesting, which makes it good. It doesn't draw your eyes from your content. There are probably a couple minor tweeks still to work out, but you are on the right track .

[lena]

for me it's just 2 much colors. maybe u should loose bgd image (dots), maybe little bit more simplier design, some font management is required (kerning, tabs, sizes, color, headings, links), rss, f and t buttons, declare which color represents what (i.e. purple color in 2nd section is repeated in recent comments), graphic elements need 2 be in same style....
overall = i like the idea, concept and layout, just few things to synchronize and it will be a beauty...
regretfully I don't understand spanish to surf a bit but i get an idea...
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