Hello Brandy. I love your work and I'm sure this will turn out great also. My suggestion is to try variations on the placement of the bullet text because I don't see it aligning very well in that spot. Maybe try more than 2 lines? The type face has been mentioned before and I agree that sans might work better. I'd also like to mention the photo placement because the images seem tangent or almost tangent to the edge so it may look better if you either move them inward or outward a bit. Good luck.