Feedbacks needed on this logo please

[sanjeebsks204]

Hi all,

I was working the other day on this 'NextPoint Networking' logo for self purpose.. and felt like seeking feedback from all you guys to help myself get it done in a better way perhaps.

Thanks everyone..

sanjeeb

[rif56]

Clean look. Good color combination. How will it work on a neutral background?

[sanjeebsks204]

thanks rif56 for the remarks.. but I am into logo designing only after i entered DC so can you plz describe what it means by a neutral background.... ??

[rif56]

Sorry to be so vague, but what I think your client would want to see the logo excluding the Purple background and replaced with white or a grey, or any light color. This will show your client the flexibility of your design.
Hope this makes sense. It is a very attractive logo.
Best regards—rif56

[sanjeebsks204]

Thanks rif56. I got it completely now. I will work on this aspect and will soon post the revision.

regards.. sanjeeb

[cclark413]

I like the colors.

The icon itself seems a tad busy, and the connecting lines are extremely thin. This may not transfer well into all types of media, probably even web when scaled down enough.

I like the font, but I think networking should be smaller in width than next point - maybe even decreasing the letter spacing.

Back to the icon, I guess I just don't get it. There are an aweful lot of focal points. Moribira has a good article on this. You should have no more than two-three key items of interest in your logo if at all possible.

[sanjeebsks204]

Thank you very much cclark413 for your remarks. I am really getting to know a lot of new things about designing logos every time I am logging in here. I guess this logo needs a good more modifications.. Hope to get it done to the perfect point...

Regards

Sanjeeb

[morabira]

networking font seems not matched to me...sorry

[Squewheet]

The font for the words next and point seem to be different. The word point looks like it's more bolder then next. And I would suggest making the font for the word "Networking" the same as "NextPoint" and also making the words networking the same width as the nextpoint. But other then that everything else looks good.

[jecrt]

It definitely reads as "networking", however, I'm not seeing it as a cohesive logo. All of the items are a little too open/spread out...it feels more like a graphic with the business name stuck underneath it. I'd try and work the graphic with the type - so it feels like a single, unified mark. (tightening the kern might help a bit, too)

I also agree about the lines being much too thin and overall too busy. I'd thicken up the lines and then remove a couple of the dots/points. (maybe even have the yellow dot replacing the "O" in "point") Then maybe adjust the angle to make it feel a little more dynamic - all while pulling everything in closer together. Just my thoughts - the palette is nice and the fonts could work.