New Av

[brand7]

Working on my site as we speak nothing as of yet.

This is my redesigned logo for my site/company/portfolio//.

[resurepus]

well, if you are still working on it, I will move it to works in progress forum.

[brand7]

Well this is my new av so that is finished! But when i am getting my website to a good place i will post it for critique.

[Chung Dha]

Only thing thats bothering me in the logo is the D in brand. Because it unreadable to read a letter d. Allot might think it says Branó 7 graphic design.

[brand7]

Only thing thats bothering me in the logo is the D in brand. Because it unreadable to read a letter d. Allot might think it says Branó 7 graphic design.

I didnt think about that before, but thats a good observation.
Its funny how when one works on a design and get to the point where you want it but miss the little things like does it read well.

I will have to adjust that font then. It funny the typographer you made that font didnt think about that or was not bothered by that, but I imagine creating a font is so taxing after awhile they just get to a point that they dont think about it, dont care about it, or just miss it all together.

[Chung Dha]

second opinions are very useful. Allot of thing people make and design they always think by them self its perfect or the best. But a second opinion from someone else could spot fault faster.

Mostly with font because your the designer and know what it says. But others might not know it so would look at it in a different perspective and read something else.

[brand7]

Its just interesting what one misses especially after working on it for a long enough time. I think this is most prevalent with spelling errors in copy. As you can attest I am sure, when working with type long enough it no longer is a separate entity but it is a part of the design. Thats when we need someone else to look at it to see if there are any mistakes.

Cause even the most thorough and careful person can miss something.

[brand7]

Ok here is the updated logo, above!


What do you think of it now?

[Ben TM]

Hi Brand 7,

I really like this new logo. It's amazing how that little tweak of the tail on the "d" can make it so much more recognizable. I think the colors and the texture gives the logo a feel like it was almost "branded" onto the background.

It looks like you added a larger stroke around the text, though. I don't know if it's really that necessary seeing as how the text stands out from the BG well enough already.

[brand7]

Hi Brand 7,

I really like this new logo. It's amazing how that little tweak of the tail on the "d" can make it so much more recognizable. I think the colors and the texture gives the logo a feel like it was almost "branded" onto the background.

It looks like you added a larger stroke around the text, though. I don't know if it's really that necessary seeing as how the text stands out from the BG well enough already.

Thanks I appreciate the feedback. I wanted it to stand out just a hair more than it did before. It may have not been necessary but it gives it a little more edgy look I feel. Thanks so much guys.