Hi, I would love some input on these designs. They are for a womens line of hair and skin products that I am creating for my client. Right now these are not vectored or finalized.. just concepts.. I think with the 1st one, maybe changing to drops instead of circles? It should convey simplicity...
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Input on these designs
Hi, I would love some input on these designs. They are for a womens line of hair and skin products that...
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make_edit
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Posted 28 April 2008 - 06:03 PM
I like three, cool font for simply and mica is made very "green" with the foliage in the text. I dont think I like the blue color for mica though,but the overall design is fresh.
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KHDZN
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Posted 05 June 2008 - 11:48 PM
I really like the colors you chose in the first logo (green/orange/magenta). I agree that you do not need the drop shadows. I like the font choice for MICA but think you should consider another font for SIMPLY. The SIMPLY font looks too "technical" or "digital" and the condensed MICA looks more elegant and appealing for a hair care product. Hope that makes sense. Good luck!
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Posted 06 June 2008 - 12:31 AM
hmm...the colors are good, i like the design. The first one, the reflection needs to be taken away. It really takes away from the logo and makes it look awkward. also the lines on the first one in orange, im not to fond of. Like the custom font on the second ones though. keep it up!
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NancyCarter
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Posted 06 June 2008 - 02:30 PM
I think that the knocked out flower detail might not scale well... Do a print check maybe at 1.5inches wide. Remember how tiny some skin care packaging is - especially those little mineral containers!
I agree with the others... the reflection is not necessary and muddies the design. I like the colors. Bright, fun, lively.
Being that your client is likely to use the logo on all kinds of packaging, it might be a good idea to keep the number of colors down and not rely on gradients or effects such as the reflection. Colors and screens can be costly in some applications. Since your client is a startup, they might be budget conscious.
Keep up the good work!
I agree with the others... the reflection is not necessary and muddies the design. I like the colors. Bright, fun, lively.
Being that your client is likely to use the logo on all kinds of packaging, it might be a good idea to keep the number of colors down and not rely on gradients or effects such as the reflection. Colors and screens can be costly in some applications. Since your client is a startup, they might be budget conscious.
Keep up the good work!
Blessings,
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vdubdesign
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Posted 15 June 2008 - 10:46 PM
Agreed... the reflection is too much. I like the handwritten looking font on the third design-- though you might make it a bit smaller so it doesn't overwhelm the MICA. I like the font for MICA used in the first logo. The leaves seem arbitrary... perhaps you could incorporate the ideas of "drops" in another way.
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