Please look at the logo's and tell me which you find the best and which is best to read FJS. Or any other advice to to put FJS together.
Logo opinion needed
Please look at the logo's and tell me which you find the best and which is best to read FJS. Or any other advice to to put FJS together.
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Posted 25 January 2009 - 02:51 AM
well actually if you didn't say it's FJS, i wouldn't have seen the F at all, except maybe the 3rd one but is still tricky, it's more like rjs
The thing is the F's second arm is too square, maybe should be more rectangle, and nothing actually shows that it is supposed to be connected to the F
Personally i don't like the bottom 3, the S messes with the proportions between the letters and the uppercase and lowercase difference makes it look weird
I prefer the first row 2nd one because the 's' adds some dimension to the logo but there's still the F problem and the 's' has to be improved
The thing is the F's second arm is too square, maybe should be more rectangle, and nothing actually shows that it is supposed to be connected to the F
Personally i don't like the bottom 3, the S messes with the proportions between the letters and the uppercase and lowercase difference makes it look weird
I prefer the first row 2nd one because the 's' adds some dimension to the logo but there's still the F problem and the 's' has to be improved
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Posted 27 January 2009 - 12:07 PM
I would go for the bottom right the most. Though I would still work a little bit more in defining the F. Now the dot of the "j" does not quite seem like part of the F so the F is not as readable as the other two letters.
Anyways, definitely the bottom right
Anyways, definitely the bottom right
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Posted 27 January 2009 - 02:09 PM
hi there
the 'f' is the hard bit to read. what if you don't have a gap to the left of the arm? (ie so the dot of j is actually connected to the 'f'?)
or you could join the arm to the 's' perhaps, so it sticks out to the right?
perhaps also try making the s taller to square the shape off?
personally i prefer the bottom right at present, but as mentioned the 'f' really does need a bit more legibility.
hope that helps!
the 'f' is the hard bit to read. what if you don't have a gap to the left of the arm? (ie so the dot of j is actually connected to the 'f'?)
or you could join the arm to the 's' perhaps, so it sticks out to the right?
perhaps also try making the s taller to square the shape off?
personally i prefer the bottom right at present, but as mentioned the 'f' really does need a bit more legibility.
hope that helps!
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Posted 05 February 2009 - 12:23 AM
The F now is more recognizable!
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Posted 10 February 2009 - 02:53 PM
To be entirely honest I looked at the choices before I read your blurb which explains that it says "FJS" but I wasn't able to decipher that from the image itself. Try playing with colors, if possible. If not, perhaps spacial and size differences would make it clearer. You also might try putting the "j" in blackout outline. Just a few ideas, hope that helps...
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