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illustrator practice. please critique!! =)


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#1 undercv

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Posted 29 March 2005 - 11:51 PM

Hi, here is a practice with adobe illustrator


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#2 grafikus

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Posted 30 March 2005 - 08:20 AM

Nice work, man! ;)

#3 WickedMind

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Posted 30 March 2005 - 09:38 AM

Looks quite alright.
First thought was ... anatomy is nice. But when scrolling down... feet and legs, dislike that :) Upper body parts and lower body parts don't match in style in my opinion.

Besides that, the work is good.
Wondering how you did those outlines? When I'm working in Illustrator I can only manage to get lines with a standard pixelwidth, but can't temper with them to easily.

I usually do my illustrating in Flash because of that :) works better for me.

Keep it up anyway!

#4 undercv

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Posted 30 March 2005 - 12:26 PM

Thanks!! SkyV and WickedMind


"First thought was ... anatomy is nice. But when scrolling down... feet and legs, dislike that Upper body parts and lower body parts don't match in style in my opinion"

I know about the feet, because i like make BIG :p ( a personal taste)

"Wondering how you did those outlines? "

In this particular draw, i made a firts pencil picture and then use streamline.

#5 belladonna

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Posted 02 April 2005 - 02:31 PM

I like it!, I also like the big feet :) perspective, I would only make the legs a bit longer, not too much, only a bit. Great work!

keep the good practice ;)
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#6 undercv

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Posted 02 April 2005 - 03:46 PM

I like it!, I also like the big feet :) perspective, I would only make the legs a bit longer, not too much, only a bit. Great work!

keep the good practice ;)
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Thank belladona!! Soy de Argentina tambien =)

#7 oxy

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Posted 03 April 2005 - 08:03 AM

I like it! Good colours, nice big feet effect and overall just works well!
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#8 AnbuKid

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Posted 04 April 2005 - 12:21 AM

yo pic wont work for me, can anyone tell me why lots of the pics on this forum i cant see? lol

#9 SenterBrands

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Posted 05 May 2005 - 05:14 PM

good work keep it up

#10 Nubs

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Posted 07 May 2005 - 04:04 AM

I like it..the only thing I dislike is the proporation...looks like the body structure is off a little bit, but still pretty nice

#11 Cuss

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Posted 07 May 2005 - 05:27 PM

I like it!
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#12 eapdesign

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Posted 10 May 2005 - 05:58 AM

I think it looks really good...i feel as if i was looking up at the guy. Was that your intention? because if so the perspective and the proportions are pretty darn good. nice work.

#13 patrick-w3b

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Posted 22 May 2005 - 08:13 PM

That is a good start for an illustration, I would suggest playing with the colors and the curves of the artwork.

#14 will7

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Posted 22 May 2005 - 09:01 PM

Nice work dude !! Slightly big feet, but it actually fits with the design of the character. Good job :)




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