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#1 ukp

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Posted 13 July 2005 - 02:21 PM

hi I am a graphics and multimedia person from Lahore. I have made my first portfolio website and I'd love to hear comments and advices from all you creative designers.

http://www.faxal.com

thanks, Fazal

#2 zcfsu

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Posted 14 July 2005 - 08:08 PM

nice job, looks like you've got some real photoshop skills. i really like some of your logo designs also

#3 Sevenlee

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Posted 15 July 2005 - 12:39 AM

Your illustrations are very well made. You've created your own style with it. I like the playing of text and randomizing of it. question, you used tables? im not a web developer or coder so i was curious cuz it seems like tables.

Ok the only thing i find dristacting of your site really is in the menu. Where it says "online" up on top? IT's cut off in my browser. Everything else seems so smooth and transitional, its like when i see the "online" it diverts my attention.

But that's it really. great design. Wish you best of luck =)

ps: if it's too late to do anythign about it, might i suggest a light gradient to fade it some to black so that the line doesnt cut off so sudden. Just a thought. :-)

#4 ukp

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Posted 16 July 2005 - 07:41 AM

thanks a lot scfsu and sevenlee....

* yes I have used tables , I am also not a good site developer, it took me some time to do it right.
* about the cutting online ... ah well its a long story actually i started my design by giving a n effect of an old cut & burned paper but i ended up with this.....and I'll take it into consideration thans for pointing out

#5 Young Twig

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Posted 17 July 2005 - 05:01 PM

It's a pretty nice looking site, I won't lie. I found it a little difficult to navigate, but that is mainly because of its uniqueness.

#6 JAZZZ

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Posted 18 July 2005 - 11:39 AM

Really nice...I like your style UKp :).....Just not a big fan of the white clouds effect you used in the bottom of the design..
Btw, i'm from Pakistan too :D

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#7 whit72

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Posted 25 July 2005 - 01:51 PM

Fantastic, is it finished or will there be samples for the print area to. some nice designs to, good luck.

#8 Antwawn

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Posted 26 July 2005 - 01:55 AM

Great site, memorable style (and that's what's important.) Good websites and logos.




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