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#1 Winter artwork

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Posted 31 October 2008 - 04:36 AM

Hi guys what do you think of this design? They're a company that takes care of your speeding tickets for you...for a monthly fee of course!

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critiques would be welcome!!! :)

#2 kamscorp

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Posted 31 October 2008 - 07:46 AM

it's good but the it would look better if youll make the icon a little bit bigger..

and erase the red color on the face of the man in the icon make it white instead..

#3 RoT

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Posted 31 October 2008 - 09:22 AM

Nice WIP - good combination of speed and guard, well done. Althought a little more work on the shield won't hurt :)

For the positive one - you can replace the color of the elipse, you don't need to emphasize on the background ;-)

And for the typo - since you got some bold outlines on the graphic element, you can try playing with outlines of the typo :)
The best design decisions are simple, because they don't contain elements that are not necessary... and contain the necessary elements in a way that looks logical...

#4 Chung Dha

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Posted 31 October 2008 - 07:36 PM

It looks quite well. Just not sure on the background eclipse and the typeface. The typeface I think it isn't really strong and fitting.

#5 Bumblebee_Dsgn

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Posted 01 November 2008 - 01:54 PM

I have to agree with Chung Dha, it looks good but I don't think the typeface is the right one for that matter.

#6 Jpee

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Posted 02 November 2008 - 05:21 PM

Logo design looks pretty cool. I'm not a huge fan of the big red dot. Second design without the red is better. But that's just my opinion.

#7 christyburke

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Posted 09 November 2008 - 03:55 AM

It looks good. I like it better without the red though.

#8 DreamSky

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Posted 12 November 2008 - 09:32 AM

It is quite good actually!
Well, I really like the second one, whereas on the first one I would emphasize with red the tickets and/or the shield rather than the skin of the guardian and the background. Other than that - both versions are pretty good.

#9 JUstyle

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Posted 12 November 2008 - 01:51 PM

Hi ! Well dne, I think your logo looks nice !
I also prefer the one without the red part...
Then, with the icon bigger + some amendements on the font, it's gona be perfect !
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#10 nuvolablues

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Posted 13 November 2008 - 12:46 AM

I'm not really impressed by the font... very nice work though!

#11 ScrumDude

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Posted 17 November 2008 - 01:59 AM

I actually like the red in the first logo! I think the shield needs a little more detail in the one-color version as well. Perhaps a different text for "Speed" where you can have a vapor trail behind it to symbolize speed? Nice, clean logo!

#12 GRAF1CS

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Posted 07 December 2008 - 01:38 AM

Very Nice, THOUGH i have to agree with some of the color changes in the above replies(white face, red tickets) I.m not too bothered by the red elipse behind him But on the text maybe try a new version with different type for "speed" maybe something that excentuates the element of speed.

Very Nice as is though........KIU!!!

#13 GRAF1CS

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Posted 07 December 2008 - 01:44 AM

Very Nice, THOUGH i have to agree with some of the color changes in the above replies(white face, red tickets) I.m not too bothered by the red elipse behind him But on the text maybe try a new version with different type for "speed" maybe something that excentuates the element of speed.

Very Nice as is though........KIU!!!

#14 rinaldidesigns

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Posted 07 December 2008 - 02:00 AM

Great work:)....agree, the face, make white, maybe experiment with color combos????...the font works, it has a serious but speeding effect...good choice:)

#15 rinaldidesigns

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Posted 07 December 2008 - 02:00 AM

Great work:)....agree, the face, make white, maybe experiment with color combos????...the font works, it has a serious but speeding effect...good choice:)

#16 geek

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Posted 07 December 2008 - 08:37 AM

The icon rocks. GOOD WORK. I love the b&w (or greyscale) version.

#17 chandro

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Posted 23 December 2008 - 11:36 PM

i like it! both are good but somehow i like the one color (gray)

#18 gdeetan

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Posted 12 January 2009 - 11:29 AM

Good work WA. Maybe you could experiment with different color combinations, maybe try replacing the red with a blue.

#19 jecrt

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Posted 12 January 2009 - 02:31 PM

the single color option actually pops a lot better, to me at least. I feel like the type is too disconnected from the image, though.

#20 awhipl

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Posted 13 January 2009 - 04:26 AM

i personally like it and would like to know where i can get somebody to do that for me :p




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