Total Joy Redesign
#3
Posted 11 February 2009 - 06:16 PM
To me it's a little distracting to have the two hearts in the name itself. But when I first saw the reversed out heart I immediately saw the possibility of using the outer shape to form a T and J. I played with it a bit. I think just having an icon like this with your text below would be a nice clean look. What do you think?
#8
Posted 13 February 2009 - 04:24 PM
#11
Posted 13 February 2009 - 08:04 PM
#12
Posted 13 February 2009 - 09:33 PM
Maybe you should forget the face and consider just incorporating a smile in it. After all, what shows joy more than a smile? And the font used for "totaly joy designs.com" is a nice font, but I'm not sure if it's working well w/ the theme, or at least what I'm thinking what you're trying to go for. It's prolly too clean and modern where maybe something more scribbly and/or even "childish" might work well. Might be worth trying.
i dont know why but i would like to try and avoid childish if i could but maybe i should go with it or if i could have the contrast of child like but still professional or "clean" here is a redesigned face... what about this?
#14
Posted 13 February 2009 - 09:57 PM
#17
Posted 14 February 2009 - 09:06 PM
#19
Posted 15 February 2009 - 04:34 PM
the two red marks under the eyes looks like tears at first glance.
Also the font you, not a big fan of it... looks too techie for a creative company. Choose something more curvey and streamlined. Also try to come up with something more original for the artwork, something simple yet something that catches the eye
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