Posted 28 April 2009 - 12:29 AM
the first(side profile) the features need to be stronger, the lines adjusted(try ROUND CAP, ROUND JOIN JOIN, in stroke palette)....The inside black shadow, needs fine tuning.
the second, again the fonts look squished, and not solid choices to match design, explore font options, try, and try again different fonts to find the BEST suited match. The kerning, space between letters, especially when type is on a path(circle), really needs tweaking. The black shadows on sword need to make 'sense', They make the swords seem distorted in a way;Fine tune, tweak, and let us see the revision:)
Posted 28 April 2009 - 12:42 AM
In design, especially in contest/critique, the thicker your skin is(so to speak) the better you'll be........:-)
I think your concepts(the IDEA behind the design are good) the execution(what you did with your idea/concept) could use some tweaks to get to design to where it needs to go.
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