2 Sided Brochure
Posted 18 January 2010 - 04:16 AM
I'd only say maybe just choose only one web address (Macomp.com – Solutions for a Smarter World) at the top instead of having both close together. I'd choose the low opacity one. It flows better.
On page two, I'd maybe move the tittle over to the right and place it just over the web address (ShopMandA). This will make it easier to read the beginning of the tittle and balance the feel of the second page.
Just a few thoughts, but wow, it looks really nice already.
Posted 18 January 2010 - 03:11 PM
As far as layout/design/appearance, it looks good. A little bit too much use of filters, gradients, opacities, etc for my taste, but you've put it all together nicely.
My only issue with it, is that it doesn't really excite me about anything. It doesn't have any "call to action", or make me interested in the product... It looks nice, but that's pretty much where it ends for me. I think "Solutions for a Smarter World" should stand out way more, be bigger, bolder... more interesting.
But overall, it's a nice, clean layout, nice use of spacing and color.
thanks for sharing!
Posted 18 January 2010 - 10:30 PM
@brandyarnold, happy to see you commenting my design again
you're right about the call to action but in fact I'm a little bit strict with the audience as this should be as formal as way as possible. ^^
thanks all for your professional comments, happy to read
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