waiting for suggestions
Posted 26 October 2010 - 05:37 PM
I have a background in aerospace engineering and this is the reason why i'ved used a shape-like wing in this concept.
Posted 31 October 2010 - 11:03 PM
My first impression is "What is it", that's not to say it "isn't" but for someone who doesn't know better, it is hard to define.
After reading that this may be a wing, I have a couple of suggestions.
The "strings" are a bit distracting, and I don't know what they are supposed to do. I can see that they have been mirrored horizontally to make up the red wing on the right, but I don't feel it is doing it much justice. First impression seeing these elements? I would try to make it appear as if it was going from a sketch into a realistic looking object. I would definitely work on the form of the wing, and maybe even spread it out to feel as if it were actually flying with open wings, as opposed to closed.
Where the lines come together it appears a little chaotic, I would try joining them better and being careful to blend the transition without open ends. This causes the eye to get confused and you cannot see the illustration as a whole, but rather a lot of lines going in random places.
Hopefully this would be a start.
Posted 07 November 2010 - 08:05 AM
1: I would leave the wings as just the frame eg. no colour fill (looks cooler this way)
2: Try different placements of the '1818', I think it would look better if it were between the 2 wings. Plus there are lots of options for the number 1818 maybe put two smaller 1s on top of each other with a larger 8 next to them or vice versa.
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