work from sketch

i was drawing with my son,then some idea come to me,i just continue drawing,here is outcome,try to do something more from it,its just work for myself,it can be like a card for Mothers day,or so..
not completely finished yet,

any comments are welcome:



original sketch:

I love the original sketch! It is really nice and could become a card for the Mothers day indeed. Very gentle and very appealing.

About the next two - they are nice but I guess they are just not my style... The red reminds me of blood too much and casts a gloom on me (but that may be just my mixed-up mind )

I love the original sketch! It is really nice and could become a card for the Mothers day indeed. Very gentle and very appealing.

About the next two - they are nice but I guess they are just not my style... The red reminds me of blood too much and casts a gloom on me (but that may be just my mixed-up mind )

you are right red is too much,i wanted to be like a flower her hair,red rose,but the colour is too deep,i was thinking just to make hair,or,maybe i will change the colour to pink,still thinking how to finish it

here some retouch and adjusting colours,but still working on it:

i think it's fantastic. it most certainly looks like a red flower now. my only observation is that the left side of the boy's face doesn't have enough delineation—it's a little blurred into the flower.

I like the first colored version better but I can see how it can be view as a little morbid

I think you have made some great progress. I use to hate it when my art professor told me to push it a little bit more (this after 20 some odd hours of what felt like hard labor).

... but that is exactly what I think you need to do here. I think some subtle textures incorporated in the flower petals would bring more depth to your image.

I think the music sheet in the back is a cool idea.

Nice work looks very good.