• hi Ch, here's the revision of my design. the 3 stars you mentioned and putting eatery in the bottom part. please check. thanks
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  • Good Job. Lets see one last version. Take out Eat replace with 3 little stars. Replace Inc with "Eatery".
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  • hi CH, here's the one with the thin white lines as per #38. thanks
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  • create your own logo, dont use straight up type. use examples #46 and 47.
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  • Its a good start, the shapes are nice and speak Diner, but the type is too western.
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  • not there yet, use sample #46 as a guide
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  • This is not beachwear, its a restaurant. feel free to propose a new idea. use example #12
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  • make eat and inc a different type. use something simple and basic. Make it horizontal and get rid of the square and the white circles, remember this is a restaurant. use sample #12
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  • looking better, add the dots on the "i" and shade as in sample #38
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  • this is a lot better! add a thin white stroke on "bikinis" only as in sample 38
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  • get rid of the dash line and try it in cobalt blue instead of green. Try a diferent type where thr "k" doesnt look like and "R"
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  • ok, thank you for your feedback! i will try to work on it!
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  • ok ch thanks for the info. i'l work on that. marlonaire
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  • lets keep working, get rid of all the elements and show Bikinis only contained in the box. follow example #20
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  • your layout is good, but your font too common, look at the examples. #19, 20 and 21
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  • your font is too sporty, this is a restauarant, look at the examples #20 and #19
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  • your design is clean a a great start, but your type too common. look a the examples and resubmit.
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  • start from this font but make it Original,
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  • your type is too comonly use, make your own logo. dont just use existing fonts. the combination of your fonts is awkward.
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  • Use a tyoe that is Original, your layout is good.
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