hands on you miami

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Project description

This is for a massage therapist business. (also, personal trainer but it is not a focus) It will be delivered in the comfort of the clients own home. Looking for a "simple" elegant design that I can use both for my webpage, business cards, flyers and pens etc. I don't exactly know how I want it. I am looking for a logo that gives a feeling of health, care, security, stress relive etc. Square shape is easier to put as a label, but it is not a must. Name in logo. Florida, Miami beach inspired. Palm tree, beach, sun, possibly a silhouette of a woman being massaged etc. Relaxing. Surprise me!!

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  • Really like the sun palm trees. But the hand looks like a bird? I want to give it more of a feeling of massage... I don't want to guide you to much because I like what you, but maybe a silhouette of a woman with the hands or something like that with the sun and palm trees in the background?
    • thank you for your feedback, I kept sun and palm trees, gave up the hand that look like a bird, and added a silhouette of a woman as you requested. Let me know if it's the right direction.

    • thanks for the updated version. I really like the sun and palm tree. The woman doesn't express massage. Maybe a woman on a beach. I like her to be more "lines" (I think) I don't know if there is another smart way to express massage than a hand. She also looks a little "fat" Also, less emphasis on Miami and more on hands on you. Summarize. Palm tree and sun are great! Some way to make it more "massage" would make it that much better.

    • hello again , I posted 2 new revisions #41 and #42 following your suggestions. Hope you like it.

    • That looks great!! Like the complete circle with the blue water better i think. Can you make the water and sun to represent a yin and yang sign if possible? Loose the contour of yellow in the the head of the person giving the massage. Can you make the person giving the massage lightly more muscular masculine? It looks like a bit like a chubby girl right now. Good upgrade of the palm tree. Maybe a little bit less chubby arm on the woman getting the massage? Hope I make sense and thanks for the great contributions :)

    • new revision #47 with modifications requested such as : person giving the massage more muscular masculine, less chubby arm on the woman, yin and yang added (a little bit hidden behind though). It was quite a challenge to put all your ideas on one design, hope it doesn't get to confusing. And thank you for all your feedbacks.

    • Misunderstanding. I really liked your previous sun and palm trees those where my favorites. What I meant was that there is a yellow silhouette in the previous one on the woman in the sun ever so slight. Hope I make some sense this time. Please let me know if I did not. Also, the man looks a little intimidating.. A bit like he is strangling her here. I do not think the yin and yang works. It just makes it look messy. But can you try it again and zoom out like the previous so that the palm tree doesn't show through the man? And the dots in the yin yang one dot with no white space like the last the one you did. Not sure how to handle the persons transparency in this case. But I trust your talent. Please let me know if I make sense. Thanks.

    • I want to ad if possible an expression of relaxation. I don't know if it will look good but can you give it a shot? I have thought about it and The expression will most likely not be seen on smaller print, but will look really good in normal size. Thanks again!!

  • Can you make the silhouette of the woman more "clear"? The palm leaf looks like a sharks fin. Miami should be the least emphasized word.
    • thank you for your feedback. This was just a sketch to see if you like it. You want a lot of detail in the silhouette or just the minimal ? My next design will meet those requirements :)

    • The massage guy is great. Don't know how to improve that. Yes. More detail on the woman. And again loose the fin ;) thanks

  • the head and the hand looks a little of to me. I like the blue wave line and the palm tree.
  • although I like round icons this is not what I am looking for.
  • Hi, I have submitted #9. I hope it close enough with your requirements.
  • I have submitted #8 that I have designed. Feel free to share your feedback. Thanks.
    • I am sorry that is not what I look for.

  • For #5, there are couple of things I wanted to point out: Green, Orange and Blue are the colors of "beach" colors of Miami (I guess!) There are two hands shaped together like palm trees overall.. On the right of palm tree is the color blue. It represents the ocean, it looks like a wave water itself. The orange hand above represents massage hands and the sun. Feel free to share your feedback as well. Thank you.
    • The colors you suggested are ok to work from. I don't like the design of the blue and green palm leaf(?) I gave more input on #6 that I liked the best so far.

  • This is more what I am looking for. I like the coloring of the name like that so the three words stick out. Also, the Miami with cursive text a little in the background is very nice. The hand and palm trees are ok. the main words "handsonyou" I like to see some work on. make them stand out by themself a little more maybe.
  • For #4, there are palm tree that shaped like hands (green color) and the orange hand represents sun and for massage hands. Feel free to share your feedback. Thank you.
  • I have submitted #3 that I have designed. The green represents palm and orange represents massage hands. feel free to share your feedback. Thanks.
  • *this page is not very compatible with chrome/droid. Will grade when I am at a pc* Can you make something with a hand or two? Miami is the least emphasis on. Rather massage. A palm tree etc. For Miami instead
  • About #29 Hello, thanks for your feedback. Any suggestions or improvements?
    • I really like this. The simplicity in it etc. Is it possible to give the shape a more female form though? It is a little to wavy. I am afraid that is easy to miss what it is if you are not looking Give me a little time to think of any way to improve it if possible. Thanks for attaching the picture with a dark color and different colors to. Personally I also really like the font!

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      frewyss {*wrote*}:
      I really like this. The simplicity in it etc. Is it possible to give the shape a more female form though? It is a little to wavy. I am afraid that is easy to miss what it is if you are not looking Give me a little time to think of any way to improve it if possible. Thanks for attaching the picture with a dark color and different colors to. Personally I also really like the font!
      |--| About #51 Hello again, I made the changes, I also added a sun (can be removed if you don’t like it)

    • thanks. responded on #51

    • Thanks for the update. However, I did like the other one better in it simplicity. You did give the silhouette a more female form but could you make it less obvious? Simpler hair possibly? she does look kind of relaxed though. Not sure about the backside curves. Still love the font for Miami. Not sure about the sun but it kind of matches your style.

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      frewyss {*wrote*}:
      Thanks for the update. However, I did like the other one better in it simplicity. You did give the silhouette a more female form but could you make it less obvious? Simpler hair possibly? she does look kind of relaxed though. Not sure about the backside curves. Still love the font for Miami. Not sure about the sun but it kind of matches your style.
      |--| About #66 Hello, New female silhouette more abstract, I hope you like it :) I also added a wave (can be removed if you don’t like it)

    • Yes. This is better. Take away the two lines of hair. Miss the palm tree with the reversed j shape as the stem. Bring it back pleas. Not sure about the blue water lines. Maybe i the bottom? I feel like I am getting more sure what I want and I do want the color yellow and red like a setting or a rising sun. So if you can bring that somewhere would be great! Can you put a relaxed expression of piece possibly? One way to make the thing at least a little bit more about massage might be to put a yin yang symbol. You could use the sun colors mentioned above and the other part as water? Maybe in the background to circle it in?

  • Thanks for the update. Hands are much better. Nice adding back the spine line. Liked the old sun more though. probably better with easy to read font on hands on you. Miami looks good though. Kinda liked the old hair better. Also, I saw that you took away the curve of the forearm.Better before. Minor detail though. Not sure how to improve right now. It is definitely in the top. What would it take for you to ad another contribution? get 60 points? Want to see how a few others turn out and think about what I want and get some feedback...
    • About #35. I returned to those detailing earlier advance. I hope it's ok for now Old sun ,old hair , old curve of the forearm. Very fine observation... Any suggestion is welcome

    • Thanks for updates. On top of my head right now I do not know. Waiting for feedback from friends family etc. Since to my understanding the posting is limited Please hold of from posting if there is something later that I want to change.

    • About new entry #38. I have added a few details here that are suitable: the palm stem, eyebrow, and two seagulls. Text hands on you I colored blue to distinguish it easier silhouette and other elements. Also palm outline is now visible on the dark background. I think it's better. And here's a version with warmer colors #40.

    • Thanks for the updates. Gave reply to #40

  • Not for this contest. Saw some good designs on your profile though. Look at the top contenders for inspiration. Thanks.
  • Huge improvement! Putting you on in the top options. A few ideas. I think I am looking for a sunrise/sunset type of sun. A little more hint of red. I don't like the color to much on hands on you. Could you try to make it one word like handsonyou and just separate the wording by color? Also, Miami font looks like a "ribbon" not sure I like that. Please try something different. My personal Miami favorite font right now is #6. Not taking about the size. But if it is "discreet in the background" it is ok bigger I guess. Maybe have the right edge of the model show a little more form the curve of the glutes. Either move her ever so slightly to the left or zoom her in a bit... Might need to move the tree a little so it wont grove from her glutes.
  • Thanks But it doesn't give an image of massage though.
  • I really like that. Maybe if you draw the spine line it will look less like the front of the body? as the hands are placed right now it looks a little funny... Maybe some work on the font? Again Miami is not in emphasis but hands on you is.
    • Your remark is very good though. I'll try to change the design a bit and font. Thank you for feedback!

    • Possibly make the hands less Dracula to. I see it as a shadow on her, but I get feedback like "scary".

    • Hello CH, Of course. I will work as fast as possible. Thank you again for positive appreciation.

    • Hello CH, About new upgrade #33 I changed the pair of hands that massage the body. For sun i used one color to simplify the print. Text hand on you I revealed pronounced than text MIAMI. Thank you

  • It has s some cool ideas. Like the hands and the face(?) forming a heart. Anyway to make the hands and face more distinct without loosing the heart? Give the face a more relaxed expression. Palm tree looks good. The problem with it is I want to be able to use it without having a black background, and although it looks nice with it in most scenarios it will not be on a black background.
    • Thanks for your comments. I'll try my best to fulfill your expectations. Ι'll show you the white background version, too. Thank you.

  • Hallo, i just uploaded my entry #30. Hope you like it. Thank you.
    • Thanks for it. Posted a reply on the image.

  • Great upgrade! Like the palm tree has the same color as the ground. Adding the hands is a great plus. It kind of captures what I am looking for. Not sure what the line on her glutes are? I was thinking a bathing suite possibly? I really like the upper body and head. Great work on that. The back possibly have a little bit to much of a hunchback feeling to it though? I think it might be the upper hand that gives that illusion as your old one did not have that effect as much.