Wonder Pens

Pretty good

$425 paid

167 custom designs

44 pre-qualified designers.

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Winning design #173 by vlada, Logo Design for Wonder Pens Contest
Gold Medal

designed by vlada

Project description

We are a specialty fountain pen, pens and stationery shop. We are looking to sell Japanese and European products focusing on the low- to medium-end pens of high quality and precision. Here are a few examples we like http://logopond.com/gallery/detail/153050 http://logopond.com/gallery/detail/181911 http://logopond.com/gallery/detail/153237 http://logopond.com/gallery/detail/149096 http://logopond.com/gallery/detail/141330 http://logopond.com/gallery/detail/168378

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  • I like the overall concept, however, I'm not sure the crown gives the right vibe to our store, and the pencil is not quite the "specialty pens" we're going for. Can we tweak?
  • And not sure how, but maybe we could add a few details to also have a balance between vintage/retro and updated?
    • Dear Sleepingdog, thank you very much for your feedback. I'll do my best to incorporate all your ideas into my future entries, will try playing with the font and will definitely add a few details here and there to make it stand out even more :-). Will be back with more subs tomorrow :-).

  • It's slightly too hard to read "wonder" and I'm worried that the pen is not very appealing...
  • Maybe we could try a few different fonts?
  • Can we try some variations on the colours of the pens? I'm worried the dark purple is too dark.
  • Hi sleepingdog, Please see my first attempt #17. Kind regards, Liz
  • Can we try something different with the wings?
    • Sure, will try come up with variations. Any suggestions? Thanks, Moh

    • Uhhm...haha. I'm not sure! Those kind of look like knife blades? So maybe something less intense? I'm sorry I can't be more helpful!

  • This is interesting. Maybe we could try something other than pencil crayons?
  • I think this may be too polished/tech-y for our company? This might be a logo for a software firm, etc.
  • I think it looks a little strange that the pen is curved!
  • The font is alright, but there is something too...bold? about the "W"
  • Great! Just to see, can we try some different colour variations? Thanks
    • i made a colour variations for #69 and #70, i didn't replace the white pale / retro white colour, to keep it contrast. thanks.

  • Hello Ch, I revised my previous entry and give it more color.Please check #64 Feedback would be appreciate. Thanks. :)
  • Hello Ch, please be so kind and check my design for your company #58 and #59 best regards
  • Can we get the bottom white text to be larger, please? Looks great!
    • |--|

      thesleepingdog wrote:
      Can we get the bottom white text to be larger, please? Looks great!
      |--| #57 is the revision, the tagline is bigger now, and looks proportional...hope you like it, thanks.

  • Hi Sleepingdog, I have submitted #54, #55 and #56 for your review. Kind regards, Liz
  • #39 and #40 are my submissions, any comment/ feedback would be nice, thanks.
    • Can I get the white text to say "Fountain Pens and Specialty Stationery"

  • Can we get the white text to say "Specialty Pens and Stationery"
  • Hi CH, Please have a look at my entries #43. Need your feedback to improve. Thanks
  • Hi CH, I represent new version #42, work is executed in classical strict style. Thanks!